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Describe a place of natural beauty you would like to visit. v.1

Describe a place of natural beauty you would like to visit. v. 1
Describe a place of natural beauty you would like to visit. You should say: what type of place it is why you want to visit this place when you plan to visit there and explain why you think this place is worth visiting.   Model Answer 1: We sure live in a big, big world with staggering mountains, massive glaciers, and beautiful forests, full of wild animals. However, while it would take a lifetime to visit only a fraction of some of these mother nature’s greatest hits, I would like to take an opportunity to talk about just one of them, which I am planning to visit sometime in next year. The name of this naturally beautiful place is called the “Lake Van” in Turkey. Now, we all know how insanely beautiful Turkey really is, as a country, but Lake Van deserves to be specifically mentioned here because it has largely remained untouched by a slew of hotels and resorts. In fact, it is fair to suggest that even though, this is the largest lake of Turkey, located almost a thousand miles away from the east of the fleshpots of Turkey’s economic and cultural capital of Istanbul, it is still quite unknown to most foreign visitors. Anyway, with its intriguingly beautiful high altitude (about 5400 feet above sea level) and startlingly crystal-clear blue water, the Van lake region has plenty of amazing sights, historic castles, including the beautiful 10th century Holy Cross Cathedral church, and natural spectacle to “wow” the visitors. These should be enough reasons for one to visit this beautiful lake. But, if that’s not enough to persuade someone to visit this place, its stunningly beautiful sandy or pebbled beaches will. Anyway, this place is certainly worth a visit, mainly because it is all-natural in a sense that the place hasn’t yet been touched by the brutal and modern development works in the name of developing “tourism”.   Besides, this region also has a great historical significance as the lake once sat astride a major branch of the Silk Road and was also considered to be a very prosperous and populous region for many centuries up until the First World War. Finally, this region was so beautiful that the Armenian people, who lived there used to say, “Van in this world, paradise in the next”, meaning Van was a piece of paradise in this world.   Sample Answer 2: The natural place which I think is very beautiful and would like to visit is (…say a place name you know is naturally beautiful…). It is a place that gives the impression of natural beauty, serenity and divinity as it a vast green area beside the hills and a beautiful river has passed beside it. The flowers and fields are like scenery painted by a professional painter. The butterfly, the birds, the bushes, the long trees and tea garden makes it a place worth visiting. I have heard the impeccable beauty of this place from my friends and everyone who went there has recommended it as a must-visit place. I have also read a few articles about the tourist attraction and natural beauty of this place. The writers describe it as an adventurous place, mainly because climbing on hills, swimming in the river, visiting the lightened caves at night are all adventurous activities that tourists mainly like to do there. I have a plan to visit this place in the near future when I would have a vacation of more than 7 days. The local foods of this place especially the fried fishes and shrimps are famous and that’s why I want to stay there for a few days. Most possibly I will visit this place next December. This is a worth visiting place because it is one of the greatest naturally stunning and beautiful places. There are lots of activities to do, lots of things to see and several famous menus to test. Since lots of people visit this place and highly recommend it to others, I am sure this is a place that worth a visit.   Similar Cue Card Topics Similar other cue card topics that you should be able to answer with your preparation for this cue card topic: Describe a tourist spot in your city. Describe a place where you want to visit. Describe a place you have never been to. Describe a place near a river or a sea. Describe a place where people often visit. Describe a beautiful place you have visited.
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Describe
a
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place
of
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natural
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beauty
you would like to
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visit
. You should say: what type of
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place
it is why you want to
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visit
this
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place
when you plan to
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visit
there and
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explain
why you
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think
this
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place
is
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worth
visiting.
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Model Answer 1:

We sure
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live
in a
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big
,
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big
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world
with staggering mountains, massive glaciers, and
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beautiful
forests, full of wild animals.
However
, while it would take a lifetime to
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visit
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only
a fraction of
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some
of these mother nature’s greatest hits, I would like to take an opportunity to talk about
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just
one of them, which I am planning to
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visit
sometime in
next
year.

The name of this
naturally
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beautiful
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place
is called
the
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“Lake
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Van”
in Turkey.
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Now
, we all know how
insanely
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beautiful
Turkey
really
is, as a country,
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but
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Lake
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Van
deserves to be
specifically
mentioned here
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because
it has
largely
remained untouched by a slew of hotels and resorts. In fact, it is
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fair
to suggest that
even though
, this is the largest
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lake
of Turkey, located almost a thousand miles away from the east of the fleshpots of Turkey’s economic and cultural capital of Istanbul, it is
still
quite unknown to most foreign visitors.

Anyway
, with its
intriguingly
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beautiful
high altitude (about
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5400 feet
above sea level) and
startlingly
crystal-
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clear
blue water, the
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Van
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lake
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region
has
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plenty
of amazing sights, historic castles, including the
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beautiful
10th century Holy Cross Cathedral church, and
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natural
spectacle to “wow” the visitors. These should be
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enough
reasons for one to
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visit
this
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beautiful
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lake
.
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But
, if that’s not
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enough
to persuade someone to
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visit
this
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place
, its
stunningly
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beautiful
sandy or pebbled beaches will.

Anyway
, this
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place
is
certainly
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worth
a
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visit
,
mainly
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because
it is all-natural in a sense that the
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place
hasn’t
yet
been touched
by the brutal and modern development works in the name of developing “tourism”.
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Besides
, this
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region
also
has a great historical significance as the
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lake
once sat astride a major branch of the Silk Road and was
also
considered to be a
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very
prosperous and populous
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region
for
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many
centuries up until the
First
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World
War.
Finally
, this
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region
was
so
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beautiful
that the Armenian
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people
, who
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lived
there
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used
to say,
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“Van
in this
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world
, paradise in the
next
”, meaning
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Van
was a piece of paradise in this
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world
.
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Sample Answer 2:

The
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natural
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place
which I
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think
is
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very
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beautiful
and would like to
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visit
is (…say a
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place
name
you know
is
naturally
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beautiful…)
. It is a
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place
that gives the impression of
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natural
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beauty
, serenity and divinity as it a vast green area beside the hills and a
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beautiful
river has passed beside it. The flowers and fields are like scenery painted by a professional painter. The butterfly, the birds, the bushes, the long trees and tea garden
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makes
it a
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place
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worth
visiting.

I have heard the impeccable
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beauty
of this
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place
from my friends and everyone who went there has recommended it as a
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must
-visit
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place
. I have
also
read a few articles about the tourist attraction and
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natural
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beauty
of this
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place
. The writers
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describe
it as an adventurous
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place
,
mainly
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because
climbing on hills, swimming in the river, visiting the lightened caves at night are all adventurous activities that tourists
mainly
like to do there.

I have a plan to
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visit
this
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place
in the near future when I would have a vacation of more than 7 days. The local foods of this
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place
especially
the fried fishes and shrimps are
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famous
and that’s why I want to stay there for a few days. Most
possibly
I will
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visit
this
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place
next
December.

This is a
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worth
visiting
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place
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because
it is one of the greatest
naturally
stunning and
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beautiful
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places
. There are lots of activities to do, lots of things to
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see
and several
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famous
menus to
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test
. Since lots of
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people
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visit
this
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place
and
highly
recommend it to others, I am sure this is a
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place
that
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worth
a
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visit
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Similar other cue card topics that you should be able to answer with your preparation for this cue card topic:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a tourist spot in your city.
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Describe
a
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place
where you want to
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visit
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
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place
you have never been to.
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Describe
a
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place
near a river or a sea.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
where
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people
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often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
.
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Describe
a
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beautiful
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place
you have visited.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
97Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a place of natural beauty you would like to visit. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
750 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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