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Describe something you plan to do in life besides your work and study. v.1

Describe something you plan to do in life besides your work and study. v. 1
Describe something you plan to do in life besides your work and study. You should say: what you want to do what you should do to fulfil it why you want to do it and explain how you would feel once you have achieved it.   Model Answer 1: I have always believed that life has to be more than just coming into this world, earning a living for myself and my families, and then just leaving the world one day. Of course, this realization didn’t hit me until I reached my adulthood. But, the good thing is that as soon I realized this, I started to plan to do something more fulfilling and constructive than just earning a decent living. And, after giving a lot of consideration to my current lifestyle and schedule, I thought that it would be better for me to eventually establish a non-profit charitable organization while I am carrying on with my profession. Of course, it is not going to be easy to fulfil my goal because it would take a lot of time and effort on my part in order to run it as a functioning organization. But, first, I would need to obtain a license and a permit to start such a thing apart from dealing with issues like tax exemption, and networking with a group like-minded people who would be willing to help me in my effort as some kind of “board of directors”. Then, of course, there are also some legal issues like drafting bylaws and filing articles of “incorporation”. Finally, comes the all-important issue of collecting enough funds by networking with some generous individual donors and organizations that offer grants to a non-profit organization. After all, I don’t really have that kind of riches and resources to fund a charitable organization. By the way, the purpose of establishing this charitable organization is to help the many poor and needy people around us, especially, who are sick and don’t have enough money to receive proper medical treatments. Anyway, I am pretty sure that I would feel really happy and proud when I actually achieve my goal because my little effort would probably help a lot of people in need of receiving some kind of financial help to make their life little better. Besides, I would also feel that many others would come forward with the same kinds of efforts to help our fellow other human beings.   Sample Answer 2: I have plans to visit different famous and historical places in the world besides my work and study. I would start from my home country and would visit all the major tourists’ attractions and historically famous places in my country. Then I would visit the 7 wonders of different ages of the world and then other famous places in Asia, Europe, Africa and America. This would not be an easy thing to accomplish as it would require a large amount of money and free times and in fact, there are several hundred places to go and learn about. I would require to establish my own business and to make sure that I have enough time and money to have my trips. I would start my own business and work very hard to take it to the top level. That would take a few years and I will need to get some help from my father as well. I would have to be very hardworking and prudent to achieve it. I want to do it because I have an unquenchable thrust to visit famous places and to learn about different customs and people. I want to explore the world as much as possible. There is no end of the plan I have as our lives are limited for a certain span of time and the number of places worth visiting in the world is really enormous. But I won't plan to visit all the places but the most significant and famous places only. Once this starts and continues going (let's consider the fact that there is no end of it), I would feel very happy for every tour I would have. I would be very happy and contented to have my plan come true. That would be a truly amazing experience for me.   Similar Cue Card Topics Similar other cue card topics that you should be able to answer with your preparation for this cue card topic: Describe something you want to do in the future. Describe an activity you would want to start in the future. Describe something you do not know but want to learn. Describe an activity that attracts you.
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Describe
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something
you
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plan
to do in life
besides
your work and study. You should say: what you
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want
to do what you should do to fulfil it why you
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want
to do it and
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explain
how you would
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feel
once you have achieved it.
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Model Answer 1:

I have always believed that life
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has to
be more than
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just
coming into this
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world
, earning a living for myself and my families, and then
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just
leaving the
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world
one day.
Of course
, this realization didn’t hit me until I reached my adulthood.
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But
, the
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good
thing is that as
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soon
I realized this, I
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started
to
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plan
to do
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something
more fulfilling and constructive than
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just
earning a decent living.

And, after giving
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a lot of
consideration to my
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current
lifestyle and schedule, I
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thought
that it would be better for me to
eventually
establish a non-profit charitable
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organization
while I am carrying on with my profession.

Of course
, it is not going to be easy to fulfil my goal
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because
it would take
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a lot of
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time
and
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effort
on my part in order to run it as a functioning
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organization
.
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But
,
first
, I would need to obtain a license and a permit to
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start
such a thing apart from dealing with issues like tax exemption, and networking with a group like-minded
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people
who would be willing to
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help
me in my
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effort
as
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some
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kind
of “board of directors”. Then,
of course
, there are
also
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some
legal issues like drafting bylaws and filing articles of “incorporation”.
Finally
,
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comes
the all-
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important
issue of collecting
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enough
funds by networking with
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some
generous individual donors and
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organizations
that offer grants to a non-profit
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organization
.
After all
, I don’t
really
have that
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kind
of riches and resources to fund a charitable organization.

By the way, the purpose of establishing this charitable
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organization
is to
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help
the
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many
poor and needy
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people
around us,
especially
, who are sick and don’t have
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enough
money to receive proper medical treatments.

Anyway
, I am pretty sure that I would
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feel
really
happy and proud when I
actually
achieve my goal
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because
my
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little
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effort
would
probably
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help
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a lot of
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people
in need of receiving
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some
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kind
of financial
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help
to
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make
their life
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little
better.
Besides
, I would
also
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feel
that
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many
others would
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come
forward with the same
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kinds
of
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efforts
to
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help
our fellow
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other
human beings.
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Sample Answer 2:

I have
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plans
to
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visit
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different
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famous
and historical
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places
in the
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world
besides
my work and study. I would
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start
from my home country and would
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visit
all the major tourists’ attractions and
historically
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famous
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places
in my country. Then I would
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visit
the 7 wonders of
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different
ages of the
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world
and then
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other
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famous
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places
in Asia, Europe, Africa and America.

This would not be an easy thing to accomplish as it would require a large amount of money and free
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times
and in fact, there are several hundred
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places
to go and learn about. I would require to establish my
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own
business and to
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make
sure that I have
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enough
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time
and money to have my trips. I would
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start
my
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own
business and work
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very
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hard
to take it to the
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top level
. That would take a few years and I will need to
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get
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some
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help
from my father as
well
. I would
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have to
be
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very
hardworking and prudent to achieve it. I
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want
to do it
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because
I have an unquenchable thrust to
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visit
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famous
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places
and to learn about
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different
customs and
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people
.
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I
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want
to explore the
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world
as much as possible.

There is no
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end
of the
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plan
I have as our
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lives
are limited
for a certain span of
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time
and the number of
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places
worth visiting in the
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world
is
really
enormous.
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But
I won't
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plan
to
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visit
all the
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places
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but
the most significant and
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famous
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places
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only
. Once this
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starts
and continues going (
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let
's consider the fact that there is no
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end
of it), I would
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feel
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very
happy for every tour I would have. I would be
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very
happy and contented to have my
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plan
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come
true. That would be a
truly
amazing experience for me.
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Describe
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something
you
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want
to do in the future.
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Describe
an activity you would
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want
to
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start
in the future.
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Describe
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something
you do not know
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but
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want
to learn.
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Describe
an activity that attracts you.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
85Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something you plan to do in life besides your work and study. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
772 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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