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Describe a cybercafe/internet cafe you often visit. v.1

Describe a cybercafe/internet cafe you often visit. v. 1
Describe a cybercafe/internet cafe you often visit. You should say: where it is what you do there and why it is important to you how often you go there and explain why you often visit this place.   Model Answer 1: It is no secret today that we just can’t do without the internet. Whether we are using a laptop at home or carrying a smartphone outside, we have to have the internet to remain informed and communicate. Understanding the importance and necessity of this internet technology, today, we can find many cyber cafes around us. While I like all of those cybercafés because of their supports, I would like to talk about just one of them that I visit often. The internet café, I am talking about, isn’t exactly very far from where I live. In fact, the cybercafé is owned by one of my entrepreneurial friends who like to play with different kinds of technologies, and the internet just happens to be one of those latest technologies which he likes. Initially, when he opened up the café at a different location, far from my residence, but when he moved the place close to where I live, I started to visit that place often, mostly because I like to hang out with my friend. But, while I hang out with my friend, I don’t mind using one of his computers to surf the internet and update myself about an array of news which affects our world. Sometimes, I also like to watch some movies and interesting videos from different corners of the world while also chatting and enjoying some fresh coffee with my good friend. Anyway, even though, my friend invites me to visit his cybercafé at least once every other day, I can do it only a couple of times a week because of my other priorities, even though I truly enjoy my time at his cybercafé. I try to visit this place often because it helps me relax and have some fun time with my friend. I like to visit it also because it allows me to exchange views and opinions on different issues with other people when chatting with them on an internet forum. Finally, I like to visit this place often also because it allows me to meet a different kind of interesting people. And, yes, I do enjoy meeting new people- both online and offline.   Sample Answer 2: I often visit a cyber café which is in our locality and offers a good environment for the customers and net surfers. The name of this cyber café is ‘Express Café and Cyber Zone’ and it is only a few minutes away from our house. It is on the 3rd floor of the ‘Shoppers Heaven Market’ and at the backside of the floor. I often go there to use the internet and take a print out. Though I have an internet connection at my home, I often go there if my internet connection is not available or if I need to take printing of important documents. I usually go there, 2-3 times in a week and enjoy the environment they offer. Sometimes I go there to purchase some computer accessories like USB cable, DVD and CD disks etc. With the expansion of the internet, computer technology and online communications, the need for cyber café or the internet cafe has also enhanced. People often need to surf the internet for many different reasons; simply from chatting with friends to applying for jobs or talking with an overseas relative. Things are getting online nowadays and the old way of communications, mailing, talking, applying for jobs or even maintaining the banking transactions are rapidly getting online. One needs to use the internet from checking and sending emails to booking flights and that’s why we need to use the internet every now and then. But all of us do not have easy access to the internet at our home and that’s why we need to go to the cyber cafes. We never know when we will need to send or check our emails and sometimes the urgency requires us to use the internet immediately. That’s where cyber cafés play an important role. They have all the arrangement of using the internet and we can use it by paying the hourly bill which is not expensive at all. We need to take printouts of important documents, scan those or even attach them to the emails and we can easily go to a nearby cyber café and do those types of works.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a place you often go to. Describe a peaceful place. Describe a place you like to spend your time. Describe a cyber café in your area. Describe a place where you often meet your friends.
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Describe
a
'cybercafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cybercafé"
cybercafe
/internet
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
you
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often
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visit
. You should say: where it is what you do there and why it is
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important
to you how
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often
you go there and
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explain
why you
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often
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visit
this
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place
.
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Model Answer 1:

It is no secret
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today
that we
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just
can’t do without the internet. Whether we are using a laptop at home or carrying a smartphone outside, we
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have to
have the internet to remain informed and communicate. Understanding the importance and necessity of this internet
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technology
,
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today
, we can find
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many
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cyber
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cafes
around us.

While I like all of those cybercafés
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because
of their supports, I would like to talk about
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just
one of them that I
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visit
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often
. The internet café, I am talking about, isn’t exactly
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very
far from where I
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live
. In fact, the cybercafé is
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owned
by one of my entrepreneurial
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friends
who like to play with
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different
kinds of
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technologies
, and the internet
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just
happens to be one of those latest
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technologies
which he likes.

Initially
, when he opened up the café at a
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different
location, far from my residence,
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but
when he
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moved
the
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place
close to where I
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live
, I
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started
to
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visit
that
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place
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often
,
mostly
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because
I like to hang out with my
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friend
.
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But
, while I hang out with my
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friend
, I don’t mind using one of his computers to surf the internet and update myself about an array of news which affects our world.
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Sometimes
, I
also
like to
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watch
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some
movies and interesting videos from
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different
corners of the world while
also
chatting and enjoying
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some
fresh coffee with my
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good
friend.

Anyway
,
even though
, my
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friend
invites me to
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visit
his cybercafé at least once every other day, I can do it
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only
a couple of
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times
a week
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because
of my other priorities,
even though
I
truly
enjoy my
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time
at his cybercafé.

I try to
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visit
this
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place
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often
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because
it
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helps
me relax and have
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some
fun
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time
with my
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friend
. I like to
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visit
it
also
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because
it
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allows
me to exchange views and opinions on
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different
issues with other
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people
when chatting with them on an internet forum.
Finally
, I like to
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visit
this
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place
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often
also
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because
it
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allows
me to
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meet
a
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different
kind of interesting
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people
. And, yes, I do enjoy meeting new
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people-
both
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online
and offline.
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Sample Answer 2:

I
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often
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visit
a
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cyber
café which is in our locality and offers a
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good
environment for the customers and net surfers. The name of this
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cyber
café is ‘Express Café and
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Cyber
Zone’ and it is
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only
a few minutes away from our
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house
. It is on the 3rd floor of the ‘Shoppers Heaven Market’ and at the backside of the floor. I
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often
go there to
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use
the internet and take a print out. Though I have an internet connection at my home, I
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often
go there if my internet connection is not available or if I
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need
to take printing of
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important
documents. I
usually
go there, 2-3
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times
in a week and enjoy the environment they offer.
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Sometimes
I go there to
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purchase
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some
computer accessories like USB cable, DVD and CD disks etc.

With the expansion of the internet, computer
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technology
and
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online
communications, the
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need
for
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cyber
café or the internet
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
has
also
enhanced.
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People
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often
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need
to surf the internet for
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many
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different
reasons;
simply
from chatting with
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friends
to applying for jobs or talking with an overseas relative. Things are getting
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online
nowadays and the
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old
way of communications, mailing, talking, applying for jobs or even maintaining the banking transactions are
rapidly
getting
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online
. One
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needs
to
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use
the internet from checking and sending emails to booking flights and that’s why we
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need
to
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use
the internet every
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now
and then.
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But
all of us do not have easy access to the internet at our home and that’s why we
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need
to go to the
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cyber
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
. We never know when we will
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need
to
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send
or
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check
our emails and
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sometimes
the urgency requires us to
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use
the internet immediately. That’s where
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cyber
cafés play an
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important
role. They have all the arrangement of using the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
internet and
we can
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use
it by paying the hourly bill which is not expensive at all. We
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need
to take printouts of
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important
documents, scan those or even attach them to the
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emails and
we can
easily
go to a nearby
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cyber
café and do those types of works.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
you
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often
go to.
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Describe
a peaceful
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place
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
you like to spend your
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time
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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cyber
café in your area.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
where you
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often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
92Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a cybercafe/internet cafe you often visit. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
824 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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