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Describe a movie or a book about the future. v.1

Describe a movie or a book about the future. v. 1
Describe a movie or a book about the future. You should say: what it is when you watched or read it how it is related to future and explain how it has depicted the future.   Model Answer 1: This is such an interesting topic because I like to learn about what the future exactly holds for us and our world. While, many great movies have been made, and many books have also been written on this interesting subject, one particular book deserves to be specially mentioned here because of its interesting take on the future. The name of this book is called “In 100 Years: Leading Economists Predict the Future” which was compiled and edited by an Economist, from the London School of Economics called Mr Ignacio Palacios-Huerta, in the year of 2014. This isn’t exactly like any other regular book, with chronology of thoughts or chain events, in a sense that it only contains the views and opinions of 10 prominent economists of the world, which included Nobel laureates and several other likely laureates, in order to offer their ideas about the world of the twenty-second century. Anyway, regular or not, this makes very interesting and stimulating reading because some common predictions –  as in the common ideas and thoughts of all the 10 economists – emerge in this book. Some of these predictions include, but not limited to, continual improvement in technology, diminishing poverty and population growth, and catching up with most of the relatively poor countries the rich world while the server risks of climate change and the spreading of unforeseen epidemics. But, please understand that these are just some predictions, and they may not carry any resemblance with the realities. Interesting enough though, after reading in 2017, I thought that it painted a rather rosy picture of our future world, with, of course, some predictions of bad news here and there in the book, but the main theme of the book has tried to show that the change in the “status quo” is almost inevitable as the transformation of wages and works, along with ever-increasing inequality, would probably make things lot worse before getting better, if it ever actually become better. Still, I think it is an interesting read because economists, in general, probably are more equipped to predict the future a bit better than some science fiction writers.   Model Answer 2: Artificial Intelligence, also known as A. I. , is a science fiction movie which was made about the future. This science-fiction drama movie was directed and produced by the famous movie maker Steven Spielberg and was released in the year 2001. This movie was adapted from a short story and was a hit in the American Box office.   I watched it at the end of 2001 for the first time and later in 2012, I watched it again with my family members. The movie plot was set to a future time when the number of population was drastically reduced due to global warming and other natural disasters. As the name of the movie implies, artificial intelligence has flourished at that time and people produced robots that exactly resembled human. Not only they look like the human, but they also act, think and feel like a human. The movie set the plot at a time that is yet to come. The human-like robots, their feelings, love, hatred etc are still in its preliminary stage but the movie depicts the time when all of those have been achieved. The storyline went on to further future, two thousand years later when the humans are extinct and Manhattan city got buried under several hundred feet of glacial ice. Then the superintelligence has evolved who could create a clone of human from the DNA. The movie depicted the future where global warming and other natural disasters will cause a dramatic decrease in the number of the human population. At a later stage, the movie shows that humans are extinct and only highly intelligent powers exist. The intelligence gets so powerful that they can create the human from their DNA. They become interested in human and want to know about human to find the true meaning of existence.
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Describe
a
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movie
or a
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book
about the
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future
. You should say: what it is when you
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watched
or read it how it
is related
to
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future
and
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explain
how it has depicted the
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future
.
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Model Answer 1:

This is such an
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interesting
topic
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because
I like to learn about what the
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future
exactly holds for us and our
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world
. While,
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many
great
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movies
have
been made
, and
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many
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books
have
also
been written
on this
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interesting
subject, one particular
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book
deserves to be
specially
mentioned here
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because
of its
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interesting
take on the future.

The name of this
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book
is called
“In 100 Years: Leading Economists Predict the
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Future”
which
was compiled
and edited by an Economist, from the London School of Economics called Mr Ignacio Palacios-Huerta, in the
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year
of 2014.

This isn’t exactly like any
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other
regular
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book
, with chronology of thoughts or chain
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events
, in a sense that it
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only
contains the views and opinions of 10 prominent economists of the
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world
, which included Nobel laureates and several
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other
likely laureates, in order to offer their
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ideas
about the
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world
of the twenty-second century.

Anyway
, regular or not, this
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makes
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very
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interesting
and stimulating reading
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because
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some
common
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predictions
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–
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as in the common
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ideas
and thoughts of all the 10 economists
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–
emerge in this
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book
.
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Some
of these
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predictions
include,
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but
not limited to, continual improvement in technology, diminishing poverty and population growth, and catching up with most of the
relatively
poor countries the rich
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world
while the server
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risks
of climate
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change
and the spreading of unforeseen epidemics.
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But
,
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please
understand that these are
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just
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some
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predictions
, and they may not carry any resemblance with the realities.

Interesting
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enough
though, after reading in 2017, I
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thought
that it painted a
rather
rosy picture of our
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future
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world
, with,
of course
,
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some
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predictions
of
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bad
news here and there in the
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book
,
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but
the main theme of the
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book
has tried to
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show
that the
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change
in the “status quo” is almost inevitable as the transformation of wages and works, along with ever-increasing inequality, would
probably
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make
things lot worse
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before
getting better, if it ever
actually
become better.
Still
, I
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think
it is an
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interesting
read
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because
economists,
in general
,
probably
are more equipped to predict the
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future
a bit better than
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some
science fiction writers.
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Model Answer 2:

Artificial Intelligence,
also
known as A. I.
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,
is a science fiction
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movie
which
was made
about the
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future
. This science-fiction drama
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movie
was directed
and produced by the
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famous
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movie
maker Steven Spielberg and
was released
in the
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year
2001. This
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movie
was adapted
from a short story and was a hit in the American Box office.
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I
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watched
it at the
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end
of 2001 for the
first
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time
and later in 2012, I
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watched
it again with my family members. The
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movie
plot
was set
to a
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future
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time
when the number of population was
drastically
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reduced
due to global warming and
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other
natural disasters. As the name of the
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movie
implies, artificial intelligence has flourished at that
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time
and
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people
produced robots that exactly resembled
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human
. Not
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only
they look like the
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human
,
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but
they
also
act,
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think
and feel like a
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human
. The
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movie
set the plot at a
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time
that is
yet
to
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come
. The human-like robots, their feelings,
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love
, hatred etc are
still
in its preliminary stage
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but
the
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movie
depicts the
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time
when all of those have
been achieved
.

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The
storyline went on to
further
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future
, two thousand years later when the
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humans
are extinct and Manhattan city
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got
buried under several hundred feet of glacial ice. Then the
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superintelligence
has evolved who could create a clone of
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human
from the DNA.

The
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movie
depicted the
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future
where global warming and
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other
natural disasters will cause a dramatic decrease in the number of the
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human
population. At a later stage, the
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movie
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shows
that
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humans
are extinct and
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only
highly
intelligent powers exist. The intelligence
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gets
so
powerful that they can create the
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human
from their DNA. They become interested in
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human
and want to know about
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human
to find the true meaning of existence.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
66Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a movie or a book about the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
701 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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