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Describe a piece of music you like. v.1

Describe a piece of music you like. v. 1
Describe a piece of music you like. You should say: what it is why you like it how often you listen to it and explain why it is a good piece of music.   Model Answer 1: Music is good for our soul. So, like everybody else, I also like to listen to different kinds of music, depending on my mood and situation. However, today, I would like to talk about a piece of music which I wish that I could listen to always. The title of this music is called “Confide in me” which is a song recorded by Australian singer Kylie Minogue and taken from her fifth, self-titled studio album (1994). It was released as the album's lead single on 29 August 1994. Incorporating elements of indie music, trip-hop, and Middle Eastern instrumentation, such as strings and percussion, this top-class pop song has experienced success in regions like Australia, United Kingdom, Scotland, Ireland, France, and New Zealand. It also became Minogue's only charting single in the US during the ’90s, having peaked at 39 on the US Billboard Dance Club Songs chart. Having listened to this song in the year 2001 for the first time, I felt like, I finally found a piece of music that I could listen to for the rest of my life. In fact, since that year, I can’t really remember a week, which passed by without listening to it or enjoying it at least a few times. Of course, there are a number of reasons for which, I like this music. To begin with, that it is considered as one of the most iconic and innovative singles from the 1990s era as it successfully combined the appeal of “trip-hop” (a new musical genre from the 1990s) with middle eastern musical instruments like strings and percussion. Anyway, I think it is a great piece of music, mainly because, no matter how many times I listen to it, it never seems to get old.   This music has a very sweet and soft melody.   Besides, its lyrics seem to perfectly match the general appeal (related to the power of seduction) of this music. Finally, this is a great piece of music also because it refreshes the mind and mood of its audience, no matter what time of the day they listen to it.
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Describe
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piece
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music
you like. You should say: what it is why you like it how
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often
you
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listen
to it and
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explain
why it is a
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good
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piece
of
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music
.
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Model Answer 1:
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Music
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for our soul.
So
, like everybody else, I
also
like to
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listen
to
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different
kinds of
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music
, depending on my mood and situation.
However
,
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today
, I would like to talk about a
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piece
of
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music
which I wish that I could
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listen
to
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always
.

The title of this
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music
is called
“Confide in me” which is a song recorded by Australian singer Kylie
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Minogue
and taken from her fifth, self-titled studio album (1994). It
was released
as the album's lead single on 29 August 1994.

Incorporating elements of indie
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music
, trip-hop, and Middle Eastern instrumentation, such as strings and percussion, this top-
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class
pop song has experienced success in regions like Australia, United Kingdom, Scotland, Ireland, France, and New Zealand. It
also
became
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Minogue
's
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only
charting single in the US during the ’90s, having peaked at 39 on the US Billboard Dance Club Songs chart.

Having listened to this song in the year 2001 for the
first
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time
, I felt like, I
finally
found a
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piece
of
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music
that I could
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listen
to for the rest of my life. In fact, since that year, I can’t
really
remember a week, which passed by without listening to it or enjoying it at least a few
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times
.
Of course
, there are a number of reasons for which, I like this
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music
. To
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begin
with, that it
is considered
as one of the most iconic and innovative singles from the 1990s era as it
successfully
combined the appeal of “trip-hop” (a new musical genre from the 1990s) with middle eastern musical instruments like strings and percussion.

Anyway
, I
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think
it is a great
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piece
of
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music
,
mainly
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because
, no matter how
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many
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times
I
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listen
to it, it never seems to
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get
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old
.
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This
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music
has a
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very
sweet and soft melody.
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Besides
, its lyrics seem to
perfectly
match the general appeal (related to the power of seduction) of this
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music
.
Finally
, this is a great
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piece
of
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music
also
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because
it refreshes the mind and mood of its audience, no matter what
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time
of the day they
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listen
to it.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a piece of music you like. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
389 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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