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Describe an interesting place that you know which is open to the public. v.1

Describe an interesting place that you know which is open to the public. v. 1
Describe an interesting place that you know which is open to the public. You should say: what kind of place it is what kind of people usually go there why people usually go there and explain why you think it is an interesting place.   Model Answer 1: There are a few interesting places in my hometown, I know of, which are open to the public pretty much throughout the entire year. But, I would like to go ahead and talk about the one that I like to frequently visit, probably because I find it more interesting than the others. It is a public lake. Located in one of the rich neighbourhoods of my city, this public place is serving as a perfect and temporary getaway for the busy city dwellers of my hometown. Stretching as long as about 1 kilometre, this public lake has many trees on both sides, and under those trees, one would also get to see many small size kiosks, but with a rather large sitting arrangement around them, which are serving different kinds of snacks at an affordable price. If anybody wants to spend his or her time at the lake, just by reading some newspapers, there is some arrangement for that also as people could easily buy daily newspapers from the kiosks there also. People can rent a boat there also and ride it if they are in a mood to play a little with the water of the lake. There are even some small pockets of areas there, scattered on both sides of the lake, which are used to do some physical activities. By the way, all kinds of people, regardless of their age, gender and profession, visit this place, in order to escape from the daily boring life. However, even though this place visited mostly by the mature and senior citizens during the early part of the day, the relatively younger people visit it during the later part of the day in the evening. Anyway, I think that it is an interesting place because so many different kinds of people visit it for different purposes, and yet, they all seem to respect the quietness and serenity of the place. Besides, I think, it is an interesting place also because it has something for everybody, whether he or she wants to hum to some popular music tune or enjoy the tweets of the birds.
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Describe
an
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interesting
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place
that
you know
which is open to the
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public
. You should say: what
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kind
of
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place
it is what
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kind
of
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people
usually
go there why
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people
usually
go there and
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explain
why you
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think
it is an
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interesting
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place
.
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Model Answer 1: There are a few
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interesting
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places
in my hometown, I know of, which are open to the
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public
pretty much throughout the entire year.
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But
, I would like to go ahead and talk about the one that I like to
frequently
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visit
,
probably
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because
I find it more
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interesting
than the others.

It is a
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public
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lake
. Located in one of the rich
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neighbourhoods
of my city, this
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public
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place
is serving as a perfect and temporary getaway for the busy city dwellers of my hometown. Stretching as long as about 1
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kilometre
, this
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public
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lake
has
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many
trees on both sides, and under those trees, one would
also
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get
to
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see
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many
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small
size kiosks,
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but
with a
rather
large sitting arrangement around them, which are serving
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different
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kinds
of snacks at an affordable price. If anybody wants to spend
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his or her
time at the
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lake
,
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just
by reading
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some
newspapers, there is
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some
arrangement for that
also
as
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people
could
easily
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buy
daily newspapers from the kiosks there
also
.
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People
can rent a boat there
also
and ride it if they are in a mood to play a
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little
with the water of the
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lake
. There are even
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some
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small
pockets of areas there, scattered on both sides of the
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lake
, which are
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used
to do
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some
physical activities.

By the way, all
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kinds
of
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people
, regardless of their age, gender and profession,
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visit
this
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place
, in order to escape from the daily boring life.
However
,
even though
this
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place
visited
mostly
by the mature and senior citizens during the early part of the day, the
relatively
younger
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people
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visit
it during the later part of the day in the evening.

Anyway
, I
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think
that it is an
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interesting
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place
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because
so
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many
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different
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kinds
of
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people
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visit
it for
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different
purposes, and
yet
, they all seem to respect the quietness and serenity of the
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place
.
Besides
, I
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think
, it is an
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interesting
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place
also
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because
it has something for everybody, whether he or she wants to hum to
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some
popular music tune or enjoy the tweets of the birds.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an interesting place that you know which is open to the public. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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