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Describe the most polite person you know. v.1

Describe the most polite person you know. v. 1
Describe the most polite person you know. You should say: who this person is how you met him/ her whether you enjoy his/her company or not and explain why you think him/her to be the most polite person.   Model Answer 1: This is such an interesting topic. In fact, I have met a number of polite persons in my life, and picking just one of them as the most polite person is not going to be an easy thing. But I will still go ahead and do that while also hoping at the same time that the others, I know as really polite persons, never hear this conversation! After all, I don’t want the rest to think that I don’t consider them as very polite persons! Anyway, the person, I want to talk about, was one of my former co-workers. His name was Sheikh Walid. I met Walid for the first time when he was introduced to us formally by our Senior Manager at my office. He joined in the same finance department as me as a Senior Budget Controlling Officer. Anyway, after starting working Walid, I noticed that he would never talk to me or any of his fellow workers without taking our permissions first. Initially, we found this particular habit of his to be a bit awkward, but as time progressed, we all realized that he was a polite person in nature. In fact, I had never seen him eating his lunch without asking us to share his food with us first. He used to respect his Senior Manager as some “god” figures. In fact, he was so mild-mannered that even our Managing Director would never reprimand Walid because of work-related reasons. By the way, I enjoyed the company of Walid, as long as he was working with us, simply because he would never complain about anything even when he had ample amount of reasons to do so. I think that Walid was the most polite person, I have ever met because he not only greeted us first but also treated our families just like his own. Besides, the fact that he would never interrupt another person from expressing his or her opinion, even when the person was simply espousing hatred, went to show what kind of polite person Walid really was.   Sample Answer 2: I have met many persons with very polite behaviours and soft attitude and among them, my neighbour Mr Arun ( or. . . say a name you like. . . ) is the most polite person I have ever met. Interestingly he is very talented, well-mannered, possesses an extensive experience of travelling and he is a writer. There is a rumour that after his son died, he started living a discrete and solitary life. I first met him after he moved to our neighbourhood around 5 years back. One day I went to his home to give some homemade cookies and food for a major festival. The way he greeted me and thanked me was simply amazing. I was around 19-20 years old but he treated me as if I was a more matured and experienced person. I am at least 20 years junior to him and yet he showed me the utmost respect which is very rare nowadays. In fact, he is well-known in our community as a perfect gentleman and a sober person. Almost every one of our locality likes him for his polite manner, serene life-style and his wit. I often visit his place and discuss many issues. He is a great problem solver and has a natural gift on Mathematics. He often helped me with my studies and we played table tennis, chess and other indoor games. The most interesting part about him is that he is a brave person and he often protests the unfair issues of our community. But those are so natural and his way of presenting those issues are so important and obvious that people obey him and give great concerns on the issues he raises. Besides, people respect his judgments and good wills. I like spending time with him and enjoy his company. We all have our own perceptions about polite persons and in my opinion, he is a perfect example of how people can be earnest and polite being very brave, intelligent and righteous.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: 1.     Describe a person who you know for a long time. 2.     Describe an amiable person you have met. 3.     Describe an interesting person you know about. 4.     Describe a good neighbour you have.
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the most
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polite
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person
you
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. You should say: who this
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person
is how you
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met
him/ her whether you enjoy his/her
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company
or not and
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explain
why you
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think
him/her to be the most
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polite
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person
.
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Model Answer 1:

This is such an interesting
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topic
. In
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fact
, I have
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met
a number of
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polite
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persons
in my life, and picking
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just
one of them as the most
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polite
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person
is not going to be an easy thing.
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But
I will
still
go ahead and do that while
also
hoping at the same
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time
that the others, I
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know
as
really
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polite
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persons
, never hear this conversation!
After all
, I don’t want the rest to
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think
that I don’t consider them as
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very
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polite
persons!

Anyway
, the
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person
, I want to
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talk
about, was one of my former co-workers. His name was Sheikh
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Walid
. I
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met
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Walid
for the
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first
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time
when he
was introduced
to us
formally
by our Senior Manager at my office. He
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joined
in the same finance department as me as a Senior Budget Controlling Officer.
Anyway
, after starting working
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Walid
, I noticed that he would never
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talk
to me or any of his fellow workers without taking our permissions
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first
.
Initially
, we found this particular habit of his to be a bit awkward,
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but
as
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time
progressed, we all realized that he was a
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polite
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person
in nature.

In
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fact
, I had never
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seen
him eating his lunch without asking us to share his food with us
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first
. He
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used
to respect his Senior Manager as
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some
“god” figures. In
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fact
, he was
so
mild-mannered that even our Managing Director would never reprimand
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Walid
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because
of work-related reasons. By the way, I enjoyed the
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company
of
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Walid
, as long as he was working with us,
simply
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because
he would never complain about anything even when he had ample amount of reasons to do
so
.

I
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think
that
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Walid
was the most
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polite
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person
, I have ever
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met
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because
he not
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only
greeted us
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first
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but
also
treated our families
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just
like his
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own
.
Besides
, the
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fact
that he would never interrupt another
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person
from expressing
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his or her
opinion, even when the
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person
was
simply
espousing hatred, went to
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show
what kind of
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polite
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person
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Walid
really
was.
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Sample Answer 2:

I have
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met
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many
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persons
with
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very
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polite
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behaviours
and soft attitude and among them, my
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neighbour
Mr Arun
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(
or.
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.
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.
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say
a name you like.
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.
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.
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)
is the most
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polite
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person
I have ever
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met
.
Interestingly
he is
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very
talented,
well
-mannered, possesses an extensive experience of
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travelling and
he is a writer. There is a
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rumour
that after his son
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died
, he
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started
living a discrete and solitary life.

I
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first
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met
him after he
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moved
to our
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neighbourhood
around 5 years back. One day I went to his home to give
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some
homemade cookies and food for a major festival. The way he greeted me and thanked me was
simply
amazing. I was around 19-20 years
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old
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but
he treated me as if I was a more matured and experienced
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person
. I am at least 20 years junior to
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him and
yet
he
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showed
me the utmost respect which is
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very
rare nowadays.

In
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fact
, he is
well
-known in our community as a perfect gentleman and a sober
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person
. Almost every one of our locality likes him for his
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polite
manner, serene life-style and his wit. I
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often
visit his place and discuss
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many
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issues
. He is a great problem solver and has a natural gift on Mathematics. He
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often
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helped
me with my
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studies and
we played table tennis, chess and other indoor games. The most interesting part about him is that he is a brave
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person and
he
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often
protests the unfair
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issues
of our community.
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But
those are
so
natural and his way of presenting those
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issues
are
so
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important
and obvious that
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people
obey him and give great concerns on the
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issues
he raises.
Besides
,
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people
respect his judgments and
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good
wills. I like spending
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time
with him and enjoy his
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company
. We all have our
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own
perceptions about
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polite
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persons
and in my opinion, he is a perfect example of how
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people
can be earnest and
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polite
being
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very
brave, intelligent and righteous.
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a
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person
who you
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.
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you have
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.
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Describe
an interesting
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person
you
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know
about.

4.
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a
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good
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neighbour
you have.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
79Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe the most polite person you know. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
788 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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