Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v.1
Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v. 1
Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. You should say: what law it will be will it be easy to introduce such a new law if it will be popular and explain what the benefits of such a new law would be.
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Describe
a new
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law
you would implement where you
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live
to
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make
it a better place. You should say: what
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law
it will be will it be easy to introduce such a new
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law
if it will be popular and
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explain
what the benefits of such a new
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law
would be.
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IELTS speaking Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v. 1
Speaking
American English
1 paragraphs
51 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes