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Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v.1

Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v. 1
Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. You should say: what law it will be will it be easy to introduce such a new law if it will be popular and explain what the benefits of such a new law would be.
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a new
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you would implement where you
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make
it a better place. You should say: what
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it will be will it be easy to introduce such a new
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if it will be popular and
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what the benefits of such a new
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would be.
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IELTS speaking Describe a new law you would implement where you live to make it a better place. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
51 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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