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Describe a game or sport you have participated in. v.1

Describe a game or sport you have participated in. v. 1
Describe a game or sport you have participated in. You should say: what game or sport it is when you participated in it how many people watched it and explain whether you enjoyed it or not.
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Describe
a game or sport you have participated in. You should say: what game or sport it is when you participated in it how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
whether you enjoyed it or not.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a game or sport you have participated in. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
36 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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