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Describe a job you dream to have in the future. v.1

Describe a job you dream to have in the future. v. 1
Describe a job you dream to have in the future. You should say: what the job is what responsibilities it has what you like about this job and explain why this is your dream job.   Model Answer 1: Today I am going to talk about the job I would like to do in the future. I will tell you what the job is, what it involves and why I’d like to do it – ‘though maybe not for ever! The job I would like to do in the future is that of a Flight Attendant. The job role is also sometimes known as ‘air cabin crew’ or ‘air steward’, but they all they do the same thing. The job of a flight attendant is basically to help passengers when they are flying. If you have ever travelled by plane, perhaps you think all they do is serve food and drinks. In fact, they have an important job. They have to provide excellent customer service in cramped conditions and are also responsible for keeping all the passengers comfortable and safe. Most are trained to give first aid, and if there was to be an emergency or security risk, they are the people who would help to get everybody safely off the plane.   Many people who fly take no notice of the emergency briefing at the start of a flight, but fortunately air cabin crew practise emergency evacuation procedures so they would know what to do and be able to take charge if anything should go wrong. Although from the outside it can look glamorous, the work of a flight attendant is actually really hard.   For a start, you might have to work shifts and really anti-social hours.   You also have to deal with a wide range of people.   Sometimes people who are flying are nervous about their journey, and then they can be a bit bad-tempered.   Occasionally passengers will drink too much free alcohol and that can make them behave badly too, particularly as at altitude alcohol has a stronger effect. Even so, however tired you are, and however rude the passengers might be, a good flight attendant has to smile and just ‘keep calm and carry on! ’ The reason I would like to do this job, even though it is hard, is because I am studying languages.   I would really like to be able to use my language skills in my job.   Working as a member of the air cabin crew I would meet people from lots of different countries, and I would be able to use my language skills.   I would particularly like to work on long-haul flights, and then I would get the opportunity to spend time in parts of the world that I could not otherwise afford to visit.   If you do a long-haul flight, you get to take your rest breaks in different countries.   I think that would be really exciting.   I also think it would be great fun to work as part of a small team of other flight attendants.   It helps that I enjoy working with customers too.   I take a pride in delivering good service in my current part-time job as a shop assistant, it gives me great job satisfaction when a customer thanks me for my help.   I expect it would be the same job satisfaction if a passenger thanked me for my help after a long or difficult flight. The job of flight attendant is not very well paid, and working strange shifts would be difficult to do for a very long time.   So perhaps it is a job I would only do for a short while, to gain experience, and travel the world.   Later on, I might use that experience to help me get a job, perhaps as a tour manager… but that’s another story! [ Written by - Lucy Marris |  Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]   Sample Answer 2: Everyone has a dream to be something in future and accordingly I also own such a dream. I want to be an aeronautical engineer and serve at any noted airline company after completing my graduation. In fact, this is the job that I have been dreaming for a long time. I might clear the issue here in brief. Aeronautical engineering is the branch of science that deals with the engineering aspects of air vehicles mostly. This is a subject that teaches some specific knowledge of engineering and raises skill among the students. As a result, they can be the aeronautical engineer in their profession. The profession is all about dealing with the air vehicles and their maintenance. But it is not possible for any individual who lacks knowledge on the issue. Rather this is the profession for some skilled people who own the specific knowledge about aeronautics and the aeronautical industry. The major responsibilities of an aeronautical engineer are wide. First of all, the engineer is responsible for maintaining the air vehicle. The position is also responsible for overall checking of a flight including the pre and after flights stages. Besides, the aeronautical engineer also plays the role of supervising any of the repairing activities of the air plane or any other air vehicle. This job is almost similar to the job of a car mechanic but there are some differences. To be a car mechanic, any individual does not need to study hard. This is a branch of science and you need to have more knowledge and skills over the issue of aeronautics. Anyone can be a troubleshooter for vehicles but it is completely opposite in the case of aeronautical engineering. The engineers are to take part in flight tests, analyse the oil pressure, maximum altitude limit for the air vehicle and more other matters at a time. The responsibilities of an aeronautical engineer are not limited. Rather they always need to remain busy. They become busy most before a flight takes off. I like this part of the job most for some reasons. Besides, checking the airship in technical aspects is the other interesting thing for me. The remuneration for the job is also smart and helps to lead a very decent life with family. The engineers also get some special facilities which are not available in the ordinary jobs. But there are some risks found in this job as well. An aeronautical engineer is deployed to check the overall conditions of an aircraft. If the engineer cannot figure out any trouble during his routine check, and trouble occurs during the flight on the sky, there might be some serious consequences. Hence, they need to be aware of the issues and complete their tasks in a perfect manner. This is a dream job for me. I have always wanted to fly like a bird and when I saw the aeroplanes in the sky, I felt something strange inside my mind. Gradually, I discovered a weakness of mine on flying and wanted to be a pilot. But later, changed my mind and decided to be an aeronautical engineer. The pilots are unaware of the mechanisms about an aeroplane while the aeronautical engineers are the people who can even make an airplane. This was the part that helped to change my mind towards aeronautical engineer. Since then, I have been dreaming of being an aeronautical engineer at any major airline company.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a fascinating job you know about. Describe a job you would like to have in your future. Describe your dream job. Describe a job you have heard about. Describe a career someone you know has.
Describe
a
job
you
dream
to have in the
future
. You should say: what the
job
is what responsibilities it has what you like about this
job
and
explain
why this is your
dream
job
.
 
Model Answer 1:

Today
I am going to talk about the
job
I would like to do in the
future
. I will
tell
you what the
job
is, what it involves and why I’d like to do it
‘though maybe not for ever!

The
job
I would like to do in the
future
is that of a
Flight
Attendant
. The
job
role is
also
sometimes
known as
‘air
cabin crew’ or
‘air
steward’,
but
they all they do the same thing.
The
job
of a
flight
attendant
is
basically
to
help
passengers
when they are flying. If you have ever travelled by
plane
, perhaps you
think
all they do is serve food and drinks. In fact, they have an
important
job
. They
have to
provide excellent customer service in cramped conditions and are
also
responsible for keeping all the
passengers
comfortable and safe. Most
are trained
to give
first
aid, and if there was to be an emergency or security
risk
, they are the
people
who
would
help
to
get
everybody
safely
off the
plane
.
 
Many
people
who
fly
take no notice of the emergency briefing at the
start
of a
flight
,
but
fortunately
air
cabin crew
practise
emergency evacuation procedures
so
they would know what to do and be able to take charge if anything should go
wrong
. Although from the outside it can look glamorous, the
work
of a
flight
attendant
is
actually
really
hard
.
 
For a
start
, you
might
have to
work
shifts and
really
anti-social hours.
 
You
also
have to
deal with a wide range of
people
.
 
Sometimes
people
who
are flying are nervous about their journey, and then they can be a bit
bad
-tempered.
 
Occasionally
passengers
will drink too much free alcohol and that can
make
them behave
badly
too,
particularly
as at altitude alcohol has a stronger effect. Even
so
,
however
tired you are, and
however
rude the
passengers
might
be, a
good
flight
attendant
has to
smile and
just
keep
calm and carry on! ’ The reason I would like to do this
job
,
even though
it is
hard
, is
because
I am studying languages.
 
I would
really
like to be able to
use
my language
skills
in my
job
.
 
Working as a member of the
air
cabin crew I would
meet
people
from lots of
different
countries, and I would be able to
use
my language
skills
.
 
I would
particularly
like to
work
on long-haul
flights
, and then I would
get
the opportunity to spend time in
parts
of the world that I could not
otherwise
afford to visit.
 
If you do a long-haul
flight
, you
get
to take your rest breaks in
different
countries.
 
I
think
that would be
really
exciting.
 
I
also
think
it would be great fun to
work
as
part
of a
small
team of
other
flight
attendants
.
 
It
helps
that I enjoy working with customers too.
 
I take a pride in delivering
good
service in my
current
part-time
job
as a shop assistant, it gives me great
job
satisfaction when a customer thanks me for my
help
.
 
I
expect
it would be the same
job
satisfaction if a
passenger
thanked me for my
help
after a long or difficult
flight
. The
job
of
flight
attendant
is not
very
well
paid, and working strange shifts would be difficult to do for a
very
long time.
 
So
perhaps it is a
job
I would
only
do for a short while, to gain experience, and travel the world.
 
Later on, I
might
use
that experience to
help
me
get
a
job
, perhaps as a tour manager…
but
that’s another story!
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
|
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
 
Sample Answer 2:

Everyone has a
dream
to be something in
future
and
accordingly
I
also
own
such a
dream
. I want to be an aeronautical
engineer
and serve at any noted airline
company
after completing my graduation. In fact, this is the
job
that I have been dreaming for a long time.

I
might
clear
the
issue
here
in brief
. Aeronautical
engineering
is the branch of science that deals with the
engineering
aspects of
air
vehicles
mostly
. This is a subject that teaches
some
specific
knowledge
of
engineering
and raises
skill
among the students.
As a result
, they can be the aeronautical
engineer
in their profession. The profession is all about dealing with the
air
vehicles
and their maintenance.
But
it is not possible for any individual
who
lacks
knowledge
on the
issue
.
Rather
this is the profession for
some
skilled
people
who
own
the specific
knowledge
about aeronautics and the aeronautical industry.

The major responsibilities of an aeronautical
engineer
are wide.
First of all
, the
engineer
is responsible for maintaining the
air
vehicle
. The position is
also
responsible for
overall
checking of a
flight
including the
pre
and after
flights
stages.
Besides
, the aeronautical
engineer
also
plays the role of supervising any of the repairing activities of the
air
plane
or any
other
air
vehicle
. This
job
is almost similar to the
job
of a car mechanic
but
there are
some
differences. To be a car mechanic, any individual does not
need
to study
hard
. This is a branch of science and you
need
to have more
knowledge
and
skills
over the
issue
of aeronautics. Anyone can be a troubleshooter for
vehicles
but
it is completely opposite in the case of aeronautical
engineering
. The
engineers
are to take
part
in
flight
tests
,
analyse
the oil pressure, maximum altitude limit for the
air
vehicle
and more
other
matters at a time.

The responsibilities of an aeronautical
engineer
are not limited.
Rather
they always
need
to remain busy. They become busy most
before
a
flight
takes off. I like this
part
of the
job
most for
some
reasons.
Besides
, checking the airship in technical aspects is the
other
interesting thing for me. The remuneration for the
job
is
also
smart and
helps
to lead a
very
decent life with family. The
engineers
also
get
some
special facilities which are not available in the ordinary
jobs
.
But
there are
some
risks
found in this
job
as
well
. An aeronautical
engineer
is deployed
to
check
the
overall
conditions of an aircraft. If the
engineer
cannot figure out any trouble during his routine
check
, and trouble occurs during the
flight
on the sky, there
might
be
some
serious consequences.
Hence
, they
need
to be aware of the
issues
and complete their tasks
in a perfect manner
.

This is a
dream
job
for me. I have always wanted to
fly
like a bird and when I
saw
the
aeroplanes
in the sky, I felt something strange inside my mind.
Gradually
, I discovered a weakness of mine on flying and wanted to be a pilot.
But
later,
changed
my mind and decided to be an aeronautical
engineer
. The pilots are unaware of the mechanisms about an
aeroplane
while the aeronautical
engineers
are the
people
who
can even
make
an airplane. This was the
part
that
helped
to
change
my mind towards aeronautical
engineer
. Since then, I have been dreaming of being an aeronautical
engineer
at any major airline
company
.
 
Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
Describe
a fascinating
job
you know
about.
Describe
a
job
you would like to have in your
future
.
Describe
your
dream
job
.
Describe
a
job
you have heard about.
Describe
a career someone
you know
has.
29Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
165Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
36Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a job you dream to have in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
1303 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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