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Describe one of your long-time friends. v.1

Describe one of your long-time friends. v. 1
Describe one of your long-time friends. You should say: when you first met this friend what he/she is like how you two keep in touch with each other and explain why this friendship is important to you. Follow-up Questions: -   How do people make new friends? -  What do you think makes people have a long friendship? -  Does it make things easier in a friendship if you have similar interests?
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Describe
one of your long-time friends. You should say: when you
first
met this friend what he/she is like how you two
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keep
in touch with each other and
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explain
why this friendship is
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important
to you. Follow-up Questions:

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How do
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people
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make
new friends?

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What do you
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think
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makes
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people
have a long friendship?

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Does it
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make
things easier in a friendship if you have similar interests?
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe one of your long-time friends. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
70 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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