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Describe your favourite outdoor activity. v.1

Describe your favourite outdoor activity. v. 1
Describe your favourite outdoor activity. You should say: what activity it is where you do this how often you do this and explain why this is your favourite outdoor activity. Follow-up Questions: -  Why do people prefer outdoor sports? -  What were the outdoor activities of the past compared to those of the present? -  Why are children less interested in outdoor activities nowadays?
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Describe
your
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favourite
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outdoor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activity
. You should say: what
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activity
it is where you do this how
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often
you do this and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why this is your
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favourite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
outdoor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activity
. Follow-up Questions:

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Why do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
outdoor
sports?

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
What were the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
outdoor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
of the past compared to those of the present?

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Why are children less interested in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
outdoor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
nowadays?
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite outdoor activity. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
64 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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