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Describe a book you want to read in the future. v.1

Describe a book you want to read in the future. v. 1
Describe a book you want to read in the future. You should say: what book it is when you plan to read it if you would like to read other books by the same author and explain why you want to read this book.   Model Answer 1: I have heard a lot about one of the legendary authors of all time, who is famously known as William Shakespeare, but, unfortunately, I am yet to read many of his books. Of course, it is not like I have read books of all famous writers in the world, but this gentleman deserves an extra bit of attention from all the book lovers around the world, simply because he is widely regarded as the greatest writer in the English language and the world's greatest dramatist. The book, I want to read by this author, is called The “Tragedy of Hamlet, Prince of Denmark”, which is often shortened to Hamlet. The book is a tragedy, which was written by this legendary English poet, sometime between 1599 and 1601. By the way, it also happens to be Shakespeare's longest play with 30, 557 words. Anyway, the book tells about a revenge story, based on a popular legend, where the ghost of a murdered king comes to haunt the living with tragic consequences. Of course, in the story, the ghost doesn’t take the revenge himself, but rather he asks his own son, Hamlet, to avenge his murder by killing the new king, Hamlet's uncle. Hamlet feigns madness, contemplates life and death, and seeks revenge. His uncle, fearing for his life, also devises plots to kill Hamlet. At the end of the story, a fight breaks out where the King, Queen, Hamlet's opponent and Hamlet himself are all killed. By the way, I am not only planning to read this particular book in the next few months but also another book called “The Merchant of Venice” by this same author. Anyway, I want to read this book, mainly because I want to learn a little more about 16th century England and Europe as a whole. I want to read this book also because it is considered to be one of the greatest tragedies, ever written, as well as the greatest play of England’s national poet, who pretty much changed the landscape of English literature forever.   Finally, I want to read this book also because it will further enrich my English language skills.   Model Answer 2: The book I want to read in the future is "Fools Die" which was written by the famous author Mario Puzo. He is a highly acclaimed writer and widely known for his crime saga Godfather. I have read almost all of the books written by this talented author except 2-3 including 'Fools Die'. I am yet to read this book mostly because this book was not available in the market and library.   I have loved and thoroughly enjoyed all the books by this author and he is a gifted storyteller who can easily keep you awake till tale night with his books. Though I have not read this book 'Fools Die', I am sure that would be another great book that I would enjoy very much. I read the summary of this book and that seemed a very interesting story indeed. No other writer has been able to tell stories of Mafia families and crime world like this writer did. His stories and characters are so profound that some people believe that he must have some contacts with the mafia and some of the stories must be real! The fiction novel 'Fools Die' was first published in the year 1978 and the plot encircles the worlds of gambling, film industry and publishing. I would definitely read any other books I have not read written by the same author. Since the writer is not in this world anymore, we won't have any new book written by him but I would like to read any book I have not read by this author.     Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a book you have recently read. Describe your favourite book. Describe a book you enjoyed very much. Describe a book you want to read. Describe a book that one of your teachers recommended you. Describe a story you know. Describe a book you have never read.
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a
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book
you
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want
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read
in the future. You should say: what
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book
it is when you plan to
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it if you would like to
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read
other
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books
by the same
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author
and
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explain
why you
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want
to
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read
this
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book
.
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Model Answer 1:

I have heard a lot about one of the legendary
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authors
of all time, who is
famously
known as William Shakespeare,
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but
, unfortunately, I am
yet
to
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read
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many
of his
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books
.
Of course
, it is not like I have
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read
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books
of all
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famous
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writers
in the
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world
,
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but
this gentleman deserves an extra bit of attention from all the
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book
lovers around the
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world
,
simply
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because
he is
widely
regarded as the
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greatest
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writer
in the English language and the world's
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greatest
dramatist.

The
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book
, I
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want
to
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read
by this
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author
,
is called
The “Tragedy of Hamlet, Prince of Denmark”, which is
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often
shortened to Hamlet. The
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book
is a tragedy, which was
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written
by this legendary English poet, sometime between 1599 and 1601.

By the way, it
also
happens to be Shakespeare's longest play with 30, 557 words.
Anyway
, the
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book
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tells
about a revenge
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story
, based on a popular legend, where the ghost of a murdered king
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comes
to haunt the living with tragic consequences.
Of course
, in the
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story
, the ghost doesn’t take the revenge himself,
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but
rather
he asks his
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own
son, Hamlet, to avenge his murder by killing the new king, Hamlet's uncle. Hamlet feigns madness, contemplates life and death, and seeks revenge. His uncle, fearing for his life,
also
devises plots to kill Hamlet. At the
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end
of the
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story
, a fight breaks out where the King, Queen, Hamlet's opponent and Hamlet himself are all killed. By the way, I am not
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only
planning to
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read
this particular
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book
in the
next
few months
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but
also
another
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book
called “The Merchant of Venice” by this same author.

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, I
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want
to
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read
this
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book
,
mainly
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because
I
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want
to learn a
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little
more about 16th century England and Europe as a whole. I
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want
to
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read
this
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book
also
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because
it
is considered
to be one of the
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greatest
tragedies, ever
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written
, as
well
as the
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greatest
play of England’s national poet, who pretty much
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changed
the landscape of English literature forever.
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Finally
, I
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want
to
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read
this
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book
also
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because
it will
further
enrich my English language
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skills
.
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Model Answer 2:

The
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book
I
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want
to
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read
in the future is
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"
Fools
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Die
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"
which was
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written
by the
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famous
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author
Mario Puzo. He is a
highly
acclaimed
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writer
and
widely
known for his crime saga Godfather. I have
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read
almost
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all of the
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books
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written
by this talented
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author
except 2-3 including 'Fools
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Die
'. I am
yet
to
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read
this
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book
mostly
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because
this
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book
was not available in the market and library.
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I
have
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loved
and
thoroughly
enjoyed all the
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books
by this
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author and
he is a gifted storyteller who can
easily
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keep
you awake till tale night with his
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books
. Though I have not
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read
this
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book
'Fools
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Die
', I am sure that would be another great
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book
that I would enjoy
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very
much. I
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read
the summary of this
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book
and that seemed a
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very
interesting
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story
indeed
. No other
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writer
has been able to
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tell
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stories
of Mafia families and crime
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world
like this
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writer
did. His
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stories
and characters are
so
profound that
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some
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people
believe that he
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must
have
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some
contacts with the mafia and
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some of the
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stories
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must
be real! The fiction novel 'Fools
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Die
' was
first
published in the year 1978 and the plot encircles the
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worlds
of gambling, film industry and publishing. I would definitely
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read
any other
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books
I have not
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read
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written
by the same
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author
. Since the
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writer
is not in this
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world
anymore, we won't have any new
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book
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written
by him
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but
I would like to
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read
any
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book
I have not
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read
by this
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author
.
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enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
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book
you have recently
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read
.
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your
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favourite
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book
.
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Describe
a
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book
you enjoyed
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very
much.
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Describe
a
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book
you
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want
to
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read
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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book
that one of your teachers recommended you.
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Describe
a
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story
you know
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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book
you have never
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
read
.
20Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
110Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a book you want to read in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
749 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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