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Describe a family photograph you remember. v.1

Describe a family photograph you remember. v. 1
Describe a family photograph you remember. You should say: When it was taken who were in the picture when it was taken and explain why you remember this family photograph. Model Answer: The family photograph that I really like and remember well is the one which was taken almost 20 years ago. This photograph was framed and enlarged by my father and it is still hanging on the wall of our drawing room. This photograph was taken when I was only 3 years old and at the 6th marriage anniversary of my parents. My father, mother and I were standing in while my grandparents were sitting in front of us in this picture. The picture captured the memory of a very happy family. The time when this picture was taken, I was very little then and I don’t have any particular memory of this event. Back then the camera was very rare in our country and I heard from my mother that a camera man was hired to take the photo of this event. The picture was taken in the garden of our house and my grandparents used to live with us at that moment. My grandparents have passed away and this is a revered memory of them. I still look at this picture and feel sad not to have them with us now. I was very little and I still look at me in this photograph with bewilderment. This is the picture that gives me the memory of a happy event, happy family, and innocent me. As I notice this photograph very often at my home, I remember it very well. This is, in fact, the only picture I have of my pre-school age. So this is very important and memorable for me. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe your favourite photograph. Describe one of your photographs. Describe a photograph you remember well.
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. You should say: When it
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who were in the
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when it
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and
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explain
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family
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. Model Answer:

The
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photograph
that I
really
like and
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remember
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well
is the one which
was taken
almost 20 years ago. This
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photograph
was framed
and enlarged by my father and it is
still
hanging on the wall of our drawing room. This
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photograph
was taken
when I was
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only
3 years
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old
and at the 6th
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marriage
anniversary of my parents. My father, mother and I were standing in while my grandparents were sitting in front of us in this
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picture
. The
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picture
captured the
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memory
of a
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very
happy
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family
. The time when this
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picture
was taken
, I was
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very
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then and I don’t have any particular
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memory
of this
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event
. Back then the camera was
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very
rare in our country and I heard from my mother that a camera
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man
was hired
to take the photo of this
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event
. The
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picture
was taken
in the garden of our
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house
and my grandparents
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used
to
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live
with us at that moment. My grandparents have passed away and this is a revered
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memory
of them. I
still
look at this
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picture
and feel sad not to have them with us
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now
. I was
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very
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little
and I
still
look at me in this
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photograph
with bewilderment. This is the
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picture
that gives me the
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memory
of a happy
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event
, happy
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family
, and innocent me. As I notice this
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photograph
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very
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often
at my home, I
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remember
it
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well
. This is, in fact, the
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picture
I have of my
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pre-school
age.
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this is
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very
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important
and memorable for me. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
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well
:
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favourite
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photograph
.
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one of your
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photographs
.
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photograph
you
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remember
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well
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a family photograph you remember. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
333 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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