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Describe a book you would like to write. v. 1

Describe a book you would like to write. You should say: what kind of book it would be when you had the idea to write this book what are your plans to finish it and explain why you were motivated to write this book. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: After reading so much about the “so-called” LDC (least developed countries), the “developing countries” and the “developed countries” during my high school years, I have always wondered and asked myself as to what possibly could have caused such “inequalities”. My “curiosity” turned into my “concern” when I entered the university as a student of Business Administration before almost 5 years. In fact, it was then that I decided to write a book on “man-made economic inequalities” after learning even more about it from the lecture of a notable economist in my country. I plan to finish writing the book in the next 2 years as my busy life schedules wouldn’t exactly allow me to finish it any sooner. Besides, I need to conduct a lot of research works and study to understand the difference between “man-made” causes and “natural” causes as far as economic inequality is concerned. The book will also include a comprehensive comparison between the economic eras before the industrial revolution, stretching back to the period of the European Renaissance, vice versa after the industrial revolution. Finally, and most importantly, the book will try to propose some practical solutions to the catastrophic economic inequalities in our world which are getting only worse by every passing day. I got motivated to write this book as I became really concerned about the ongoing economic exploitation of one group over the others in the disguise of a “crony” capitalism and free market economy. The world was supposed to be a better place with so many technological advancements and so-called economic growth, but, the situation is quite the opposite in reality. In fact, I became even more determined to write the book after learning that almost 800 million people of this world go to bed hungry every night while millions of tons of foods are getting wasted by the so-called rich and powerful every day. Besides, I have always wanted to help the poor and needy. So, if my book is a success story, I could surely donate the profits that I would have made from the sales of my book. So, just wish me luck!

IELTS speaking Describe a book you would like to write. v.1

Describe
a book you would like to write. You should say: what kind of book it would be when you had the
idea
to write this book what are your plans to finish it and
explain
why you
were motivated
to write this book. [You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1: After reading
so
much about the “
so
-called” LDC (least
developed countries
), the “
developing countries
” and the “
developed countries
” during my high school years, I have always wondered and asked myself as to what
possibly
could have caused such “inequalities”. My “curiosity” turned into my “concern” when I entered the university as a student of Business Administration
before
almost 5 years. In fact, it was then that I decided to write a book on “
man
-made economic inequalities” after learning even more about it from the lecture of a notable economist in my country. I plan to finish writing the book in the
next
2 years as my busy life schedules wouldn’t exactly
allow
me to finish it any sooner.
Besides
, I need to conduct
a lot of
research works and study to understand the difference between “
man
-made” causes and “natural” causes as far as economic inequality
is concerned
. The book will
also
include a comprehensive comparison between the economic eras
before
the industrial revolution, stretching back to the period of the European Renaissance, vice versa after the industrial revolution.
Finally
, and most
importantly
, the book will try to propose
some
practical solutions to the catastrophic economic inequalities in our
world
which are getting
only
worse by every passing day. I
got
motivated to write this book as I became
really
concerned about the ongoing economic exploitation of one group over the others in the disguise of a “crony” capitalism and free market economy. The
world
was supposed
to be a better place with
so
many
technological advancements and
so
-called economic growth,
but
, the situation is quite the opposite in reality. In fact, I became even more determined to write the book after learning that almost 800 million
people
of this
world
go to bed hungry every night while millions of tons of foods are getting wasted by the
so
-called rich and powerful every day.
Besides
, I have always wanted to
help
the poor and needy.
So
, if my book is a success story, I could
surely
donate the profits that I would have made from the sales of my book.
So
,
just
wish me luck!
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
59Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
3 paragraphs
440 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6