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Describe a book that had a major influence on you. v.1

Describe a book that had a major influence on you. v. 1
Describe a book that had a major influence on you. You should say: what the name of the book and its author how you first heard of the book what the main story of the book is and explain why it had a major influence on you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Part 3: Follow-up Questions: How often do you read books? How books can impact on a man's life? Name some of the famous writers of your country? Have you ever thought about writing a book? How reading books is different from watching movies?
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that had a major influence on you. You should say: what the name of the
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book
and its author how you
first
heard of the
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what the main story of the
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is and
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explain
why it had a major influence on you. [You will
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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Part 3: Follow-up Questions: How
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do you read
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books
? How
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books
can impact on a
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man
's life? Name
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some of the
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writers of your country? Have you ever
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thought
about writing a
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? How reading
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is
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different
from watching movies?
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS speaking Describe a book that had a major influence on you. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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