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Describe someone in your family who you really admire. v.1

Describe someone in your family who you really admire. v. 1
Describe someone in your family who you really admire. You should say:  what relation this person is to you  what are your first memories of this person  how often you see this person and explain why you really admire this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Part 3: Follow-up Questions: Q. What are the values of family in your country? Q. How family bonding is necessary for happiness in life? Q. What type of family do you like? Nuclear family or joint family? Q. How family value and bonding have changed over the last decade?
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someone in your
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who you
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admire. You should say:
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what relation this
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person
is to you
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what are your
first
memories of this
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person
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how
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often
you
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see
this
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person
and
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explain
why you
really
admire this
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person
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Part 3: Follow-up Questions: Q. What are the values of
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family
in your country?

Q. How
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family
bonding is necessary for happiness in life?

Q. What type of
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family
do you like? Nuclear
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family
or joint family?

Q. How
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value and bonding have
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changed
over the last decade?
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe someone in your family who you really admire. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
128 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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