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Describe your favourite restaurant. v.1

Describe your favourite restaurant. v. 1
Describe your favourite restaurant. You should say: where it is what it looks like from inside and outside what kinds of food they serve and explain why it is your favourite restaurant. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Follow-up Questions: Which one is better: home-made food or food from a restaurant? What traditional food do you have in your country? What types of food tourists in your city prefer?   Model Answer 1:   Moving to New Delhi from a small town because of the job, of course, has its disadvantages. But, it has some benefits as well, and one such benefit is that you have many, literally countless number of great restaurants to try your favourite food. Today, I would like to talk about one such restaurant which has been my favourite since the day I moved to the capital of my country. The name of the restaurant is “Bukhara” which is located in the diplomatic enclave of New Delhi. This high-end fine dining restaurant has an extravagant ambience and stylish aura which reflects the modernity and glamorous style of “Indian Royalty”. The interior wall of this famous, all-Indian restaurant is made of expensive tiles with perfect lighting scheme to illuminate them. The tables are not placed too close to each other either in order to ensure the privacy of the customers. The plates and cutleries look exceptionally good and elegant which perfectly blends in with the royal interior of the restaurant. And, as for the foods, the celebrated restaurant serves authentic Mughlai foods such as Murgh Tandoori, Tandoori Guchchi, sumptuous Mutton Biryani, Chaamp Taajdar (mutton chops braised and grilled), authentic Butter Chicken and Daal along with Malai tikka and Raarhya Meat which are served with crisp Rotis and Ulta Tawa parathas. It also serves "Sarson da saag" and "Makki di roti”. Finally, Dal Bukhara, served with the Tandoori Naan, Kastoori kebab, Reshmi kebab would also satisfy your taste-buds anytime.    It is my favourite restaurant mainly because they always serve fresh food with the best ingredients available in the market. Besides, whenever I come to this restaurant, the staffs always treat me like a “royal” with a very friendly attitude. I love this restaurant also because it always serves the foods at the right time, after ordering for them, without keeping me waiting and hungry. Finally, this is my favourite restaurant also because it perfectly blends the taste of different kinds of Indian cuisines from different parts of India.   Sample Answer 2:   Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to talk about my favourite restaurant. The name of my favourite restaurant is Diner's Paradise and it is located in the downtown of the city I live in. I like it because it offers a nice environment and delicious food. Moreover, I have many pleasant memories related to this establishment. My parents celebrated some of my birthday parties there, our college friends arranged get-together parties twice, and in one occasion, one of my cousins’ marriage ceremony was celebrated at that very place; and all these events make it special to me. The restaurant has three floors and the sitting arrangement is extraordinary which does not compromise privacy, unlike many other restaurants. Paintings of famous artists hang on the wall and the place is clean. The interior decoration is simply gorgeous. Besides, the ground floor can park more than 50 cars. It also has a large playground for children. Finally, the front view of the restaurant is unique as it gives the aura of a green and lavish garden. The restaurant offers several dishes including continental menus, Italian, Thai, Indian, Pakistani and local menus along with the delightful exotic desserts. Not to mention, the prices are reasonable and the food is served reasonably quickly, contrary to some other eateries where you have to wait for a long for your food to be served. Besides, the attendants and other staff members are friendly and they treat the guests cordially. The restaurant offers a wide range of dishes to pick from and no additional service charge is imposed on the final bill. The soft background music and instrumentals make the environment more enjoyable and soothing. As I have said, tables are not congested and people can enjoy their personal conversations and enjoy sports on large TVs. The large glass-made windows offer the city view which makes the place worth visiting. The place is famous for dining and I have often noticed many foreign tourists visiting the restaurant. It's a good thing that the authority invites customer feedback and comments on food, service and dining experience and they take prompt actions against customer complaints. I would say, this is a really nice restaurant to go to and enjoy the tasty food and I like it very much.   Model Answer 3: Thank you very much for this nice topic. I would like to talk about my favourite restaurant and mention where it is, what it looks like, the kinds of food it serves and why it is so special to me. My favourite restaurant is in England! It is actually in the suburbs of the city of Sheffield where I live in. The restaurant is on a busy street very near to a large park. It is quite a small and hectic place called Jonty’s because Jonty is the name of the person who set up the business. From the outside, the restaurant doesn’t look very impressive. It has large glass windows at the front and some benches outside for people to sit on if they are waiting to go in. There used to be a large sign with the name of the restaurant written on it in big letters, but recently they have taken down the sign and not yet replaced it! Inside there are lots of square wooden tables, each with about four chairs around them. The restaurant is on two levels, I prefer to go upstairs to the first floor because there you can sometimes get a window seat and enjoy watching people as they go past in the street outside. The restaurant serves mainly breakfast and lunch meals. It does really good coffee – I like their latte’s best – and lots of sandwiches, salads and special soups. The restaurant also has a selection of delicious, gooey homemade cakes. However, when I go, I always have the same thing – scrambled egg on wholemeal toast with mushrooms, because that is what I like best! The restaurant is very special to me and my friends because we meet there every Saturday. On Saturday’s about 500 people go to the local park for 9. 00 in the morning to take part in a 5 km run. Afterwards, I like to go to breakfast at Jonty’s with three of my best friends. We feel we deserve a big breakfast after our run, and we enjoy catching up with each other’s news over a leisurely meal together. So if ever you are in Sheffield, I hope you will find Jonty’s and enjoy it as much as I do. [ Written by - Lucy Marris (UK) ]   Sample Answer 4: 'Dine Excellence' is the largest restaurant in our city and this is my favourite eatery in my area. This place offers a great dining experience and the view, both inside and outside, is spectacular. This is a beautiful restaurant with a great price and a clean environment. I often go there to enjoy my meal with my wife and on some occasions, with my friends. It is a four-storied restaurant and the 2nd floor is reserved for parties and special events. The playground for children is large enough and a good number of toys are placed there for children to have fun. The roof-top is my personal favourite as it gives a very clear view of the surrounding nature and the clear blue sky. If it is not raining, I like to enjoy my dinner at the roof-top. The interior decoration of the restaurant is something that makes it stand out from the crowd. The soft music, delicious dishes and well-mannered and prompt staffs make it a worth visiting place for food lovers. The variety of dishes this restaurant offers is another great thing about it. Someone will find almost any local or famous foreign menu there and the master cooks make the food tasty and worth enjoying. Interestingly, the price of the food in this restaurant is comparatively cheaper and that's the main reason I love this restaurant so much - it is indeed pocket-friendly.   Many other restaurants in my city offer delightful dishes and good services, but most of them are expensive. The weekly music concert and discount for regular customers are two other reasons I prefer it more than other restaurants. I was very surprised to get as high as 30-35% discount on a few occasions and they told me that this was their way of rewarding loyal customers. I would recommend anyone in this city to enjoy the delicious menu this restaurant offers and I am sure most of them would love the experience.
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restaurant
. You should say: where it is what it
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looks
like from inside and
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outside
what kinds of
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food
they
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serve
and
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about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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notes to
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food
or
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food
from a
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restaurant
? What traditional
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food
do you have in your country? What types of
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food
tourists in your city prefer?
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1:
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Moving to New Delhi from a
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small
town
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because
of the job,
of course
, has its disadvantages.
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, it has
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benefits as
well
, and one such benefit is that you have
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,
literally
countless number of
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great
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restaurants
to try your
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favourite
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food
.
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Today
, I would like to
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talk
about one such
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restaurant
which has been my
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favourite
since the day I
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moved
to the capital of my country. The
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name
of the
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restaurant
is “Bukhara” which
is located
in the diplomatic enclave of New Delhi. This high-
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end
fine
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dining
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restaurant
has an extravagant ambience and stylish aura which reflects the modernity and glamorous style of “Indian Royalty”. The
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interior
wall of this
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famous
, all-Indian
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restaurant
is made
of expensive tiles with perfect lighting scheme to illuminate them. The tables are not placed too close to each
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other
either in order to ensure the privacy of the
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customers
.
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The
plates and
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cutleries
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look
exceptionally
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good
and elegant which
perfectly
blends in with the royal
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interior
of the
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restaurant
. And, as for the
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foods
, the celebrated
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restaurant
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serves
authentic
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Mughlai
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foods
such as
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Murgh
Tandoori, Tandoori
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Guchchi
, sumptuous Mutton Biryani,
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Chaamp
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Taajdar
(mutton chops braised and grilled), authentic Butter Chicken and
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Daal
along with
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Malai
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tikka
and
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Raarhya
Meat which
are served
with crisp
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Rotis
and
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Ulta
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Tawa
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parathas
. It
also
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serves
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"
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Sarson
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da
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saag
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and
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Makki
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di
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roti
”.
Finally
,
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Dal
Bukhara, served with the Tandoori Naan,
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Kastoori
kebab,
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Reshmi
kebab would
also
satisfy your taste-buds anytime.
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It is my
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restaurant
mainly
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because
they always
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serve
fresh
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food
with the best ingredients available in the market.
Besides
, whenever I
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come
to this
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restaurant
, the staffs always treat me like a “royal” with a
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very
friendly attitude. I
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love
this
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also
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because
it always
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serves
the
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foods
at the
right
time, after ordering for them, without keeping me waiting and hungry.
Finally
, this is my
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favourite
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also
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because
it
perfectly
blends the taste of
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different
kinds of Indian cuisines from
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different
parts of India.
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2:
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Thank you
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very
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much
for giving me the opportunity to
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talk
about my
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favourite
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restaurant
. The
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name
of my
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favourite
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restaurant
is Diner's Paradise and it
is located
in the downtown of the city I
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live
in. I like it
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because
it
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offers
a nice environment and
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delicious
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food
.
Moreover
, I have
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many
pleasant memories related to this establishment. My parents celebrated
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some
of my birthday parties there, our college friends arranged
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get
-together parties twice, and in one occasion, one of my cousins’ marriage ceremony
was celebrated
at that
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very
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place
; and all these
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events
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make
it
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special
to me.

The
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restaurant
has three
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floors
and the sitting arrangement is extraordinary which does not compromise privacy, unlike
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many
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other
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restaurants
. Paintings of
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famous
artists hang on the wall and the
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place
is clean. The
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interior
decoration is
simply
gorgeous.
Besides
, the ground
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floor
can park more than 50 cars. It
also
has a
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large
playground for children.
Finally
, the front
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view
of the
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restaurant
is unique as it gives the aura of a green and lavish garden.

The
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restaurant
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offers
several
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dishes
including continental
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menus
, Italian, Thai, Indian, Pakistani and local
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menus
along with the delightful exotic desserts. Not to mention, the prices are reasonable and the
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food
is served
reasonably
quickly
, contrary to
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some
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other
eateries where you
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have to
wait for a long for your
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food
to
be served
.
Besides
, the attendants and
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other
staff members are
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friendly and
they treat the guests
cordially
. The
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restaurant
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offers
a wide range of
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dishes
to pick from and no additional service charge
is imposed
on the final bill. The soft background music and instrumentals
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make
the environment more enjoyable and soothing. As I have said, tables are not congested and
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people
can
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enjoy
their personal conversations and
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enjoy
sports on
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large
TVs. The
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large
glass-made windows
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offer
the city
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view
which
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makes
the
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place
worth visiting. The
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place
is
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famous
for
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dining
and I have
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often
noticed
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many
foreign tourists visiting the
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restaurant
. It's a
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good
thing that the authority invites
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customer
feedback and comments on
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food
, service and
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dining
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experience and
they take prompt actions against
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customer
complaints.

I would say, this is a
really
nice
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restaurant
to go to and
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enjoy
the tasty
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food
and I like it
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very
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much
.
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Answer
3: Thank you
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very
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much
for this nice topic. I would like to
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talk
about my
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favourite
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restaurant
and mention where it is, what it
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looks
like, the kinds of
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food
it
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serves
and why it is
so
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special
to me.

My
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favourite
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restaurant
is in England! It is
actually
in the suburbs of the city of Sheffield where I
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live
in. The
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restaurant
is on a busy street
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very
near to a
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large
park. It is quite a
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small
and hectic
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place
called
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Jonty
’s
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because
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Jonty
is the
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name
of the person who set up the business.

From the
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outside
, the
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restaurant
doesn’t
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look
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very
impressive. It has
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large
glass windows at the front and
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some
benches
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outside
for
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people
to sit on if they are waiting to go in. There
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used
to be a
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large
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sign
with the
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name
of the
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restaurant
written on it in
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big
letters,
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but
recently they have taken down the
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sign
and not
yet
replaced it! Inside there are lots of square wooden tables, each with about four chairs around them. The
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restaurant
is on two levels, I prefer to go upstairs to the
first
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floor
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because
there you can
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sometimes
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get
a window seat and
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enjoy
watching
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people
as they go past in the street outside.

The
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restaurant
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serves
mainly
breakfast and lunch meals. It does
really
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good
coffee
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–
I like their latte’s best
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–
and lots of sandwiches, salads and
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special
soups. The
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restaurant
also
has a selection of
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delicious
, gooey homemade cakes.
However
, when I go, I always have the same thing
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–
scrambled egg on wholemeal toast with mushrooms,
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because
that is
what I like best!

The
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restaurant
is
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very
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special
to me and my friends
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because
we
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meet
there every Saturday. On Saturday’s about 500
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people
go to the local park for 9. 00 in the morning to
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take part
in a 5 km run. Afterwards, I like to go to breakfast at
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Jonty
’s with three of my best friends. We feel we deserve a
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big
breakfast after our run, and we
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enjoy
catching up with each
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other’s
news over a
leisurely
meal together.

So
if ever you are in Sheffield, I hope you will find
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Jonty
’s and
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enjoy
it as
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much
as I do.
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[
Written by
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-
Lucy
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Marris
(UK)
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Sample
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Answer
4: 'Dine Excellence' is the largest
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restaurant
in our city and this is my
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favourite
eatery in my area. This
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place
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offers
a
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great
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dining
experience and the
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view
, both inside and
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outside
, is spectacular. This is a
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beautiful
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restaurant
with a
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great
price and a clean environment. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
go there to
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enjoy
my meal with my wife and on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
occasions, with my friends.

It is a four-storied
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restaurant
and the 2nd
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floor
is reserved
for parties and
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special
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events
. The playground for children is
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large
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enough
and a
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good
number of toys
are placed
there for children to have fun. The roof-top is my personal
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
as it gives a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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clear
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view
of the surrounding nature and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
blue sky. If it is not raining, I like to
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enjoy
my dinner at the roof-top. The
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interior
decoration of the
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restaurant
is something that
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makes
it stand out from the crowd. The soft music,
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delicious
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dishes
and
well
-mannered and prompt staffs
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make
it a worth visiting
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place
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
lovers.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
variety of
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dishes
this
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restaurant
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offers
is another
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great
thing about it. Someone will find almost any local or
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famous
foreign
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menu
there and the master cooks
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make
the
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food
tasty and worth enjoying.
Interestingly
, the price of the
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food
in this
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restaurant
is
comparatively
cheaper and that's the main reason I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
this
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restaurant
so
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much
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
it is
indeed
pocket-friendly.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
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other
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restaurants
in my city
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offer
delightful
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dishes
and
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good
services,
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but
most of them are expensive.

The weekly music concert and discount for regular
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customers
are two
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other
reasons I prefer it more than
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other
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restaurants
. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
surprised to
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get
as high as 30-35% discount
Consider using "occasionally"
on a few occasions
and they
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told
me that this was their way of rewarding loyal
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customers
. I would recommend anyone in this city to
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enjoy
the
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delicious
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menu
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
offers and
I am sure most of them would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the experience.
22Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
207Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
68Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite restaurant. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
1552 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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