Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Giả sử bạn là hướng dẫn viên, Bạn hãy thuyết minh cho khách về Đền Quán Thánh

Giả sử bạn là hướng dẫn viên, Bạn hãy thuyết minh cho khách về Đền Quán Thánh q1k65
First of all, allow me to send my best wishes for health and best regards to all members of our delegation who were present at Quan Thanh Temple today. I would like to introduce myself as Binh Minh who will be the narrator at the relic site of our delegation today, I am very honored to be the companion of our delegation on today's trip. We wish our group a very useful and meaningful visit. Today's trip of our group will last for about 1 hour 30 minutes, we will visit to experience the architecture and culture of Vietnamese people at Quan Thanh temple in 1 hour. After visiting and experiencing, we will have 30 minutes of free time to visit and take photos, you can enjoy famous dishes in this area, 100m from the gate of the relic site. At 9: 30 a. m. our group will be at the gate of the relic site to move to the next place to visit. Before moving inside, I have some notes to inform our delegation, when going inside to ensure environmental hygiene and preserve the beauty of the landscape, please dispose of your trash in the right place. and another thing is that we try not to split the time during the tour together to avoid getting lost in the group. Now let's visit the first site of today's trip. Currently, our group is standing at the gate of Quan Thanh temple located in Ba Dinh district, Hanoi city, the temple is located next to Truc Bach lake overlooking West lake, creating harmony in landscape architecture and in religious culture of Vietnam. Vietnamese. Quan Thanh temple was built in the Ly Dynasty (1010 - 1028) when Ly Thai To left the capital from Hoa Lu - Ninh Binh to Thang Long - Hanoi, he built the temple. Quan Thanh Temple is one of four temples guarding the gateway of Thang Long Citadel, including: Bach Ma Temple, Voi Phuc Temple, Kim Lien Temple, and Quan Thanh Temple, affirming the nation's sense of independence and sovereignty and solidarity. tight dynastic rule. Quan Thanh Temple is a particularly important architectural work associated with the formation and development of the ancient Thang Long citadel and present day Hanoi. Our group is standing at the gate of the temple, opposite the gate, there are four pillars consisting of 4 large columns, the inner two columns are higher than the outer two columns, above there is a carving of a phoenix and two mascots in the folk beliefs of Vietnam. Vietnamese people Do you see this port with a normal port? Yes, that's right, this gate is called tam quan gate, it's different from the normal gate because in addition to the main gate, there are 2 small gates forming 3 aisles, this gate is usually built in temples, one number of palaces, communal houses, and villages according to the traditional architecture of the Vietnamese people. The three-way gate means three ways of seeing Buddhism. Above the gate, there is a kanji inscription, may I ask if anyone in our group understands the meaning of the above words? This is the kanji meaning of the three words that are Chan Vu Quan, the name of the temple when the Nguyen Dynasty came to rule. And now invite our group to go inside to visit, currently our group is standing in front of the mortuary house. This is a large space decorated according to traditional Vietnamese architecture. In the middle in front of the main hall is a rockery with the meaning of accumulating essence, harmonizing yin and yang. On our right hand side is a row of statues of elephants in uniform, put them here to show respect to Huyen Thien Tran Vu, meaning that big animals still obey him. Now we will go inside the temple to learn more about the architecture here. Currently, our group is standing inside the shrine hall of the temple, the temple has two layers, the outer layer has a high hammock door, both layers hang a signboard carved with the poem of King Thieu Tri. Standing here we can see more clearly about the ancient architecture of the Vietnamese people. The skillful carvings are integrated into the wooden slats of the temple with typical themes such as flowers, bats, fish, wine gourds, swords, scenes of life on earth and heaven. . . This sculpture is deeply influenced by the Le Dynasty. In addition to the artistic architecture of Quan Thanh Temple, many antiques are preserved, such as the bronze medallion built in the Trinh lord's time by Admiral Le Van Ngu minting money. There is a small statue called the statue of boss Trong, cast in black bronze, and people believe that this is the man who commanded the casting of Tran Vu statue. The whole group of us went to the last room of the temple, also known as the harem, where the treasure is located, the heart of the whole temple is the statue of Huyen Thien Tran Vu built in the year of Vinh Tri king. Le Hy Tong (1677) is 3. 96m high, 8m in circumference, weighs 4 tons and sits on a 1. 2m high marble rock. The statue has a square-shaped face, dignified and calm with straight eyes, long beard, loose hair, and no hat. Wearing a Taoist robe, he sat on a stone platform holding a sword against the back of a turtle lying between his legs around the blade with a snake wrapped from bottom to top. Snake turtle and sword combined is the symbol of Huyen Thien Tran Vu. And this is also the last point in today's visit to Quan Thanh Temple. Do you have any questions to ask, I will answer your questions to the best of my knowledge. Yes, if you have no more questions, I would like to say goodbye to our group here. Currently at 9am you will have 30 minutes to freely visit and rest, at 9: 30am we will be at the gate to move to the next place to visit. See you in the near future and will also hope that Vietnam will be a great destination for you.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
my best wishes for health and best regards to all members of our delegation who were present at
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
. I would like to introduce myself as
Possible spelling mistake found.
Binh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Minh
who will be the narrator at the relic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
of our delegation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
honored to be the companion of our delegation on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today's
trip. We wish our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful and meaningful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Today's
trip of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
will last for about 1 hour 30 minutes, we will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
to experience the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
and culture of Vietnamese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
at
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
in 1 hour. After visiting and experiencing, we will have 30 minutes of free time to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
and take photos, you can enjoy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
dishes in this area,
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "100 m"
100m
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
of the relic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
. At 9: 30 a. m. our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
will be at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
of the relic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to the
next
place to visit.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
moving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inside
, I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
notes to inform our delegation, when going
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inside
to ensure environmental hygiene and preserve the beauty of the landscape,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
dispose of your trash in the
right
place.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
and
another thing is that we try not to split the time during the tour together to avoid getting lost in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today's
trip.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Currently
, our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
standing
at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
located in Ba
Possible spelling mistake found.
Dinh
district, Hanoi city, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
is located
next
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Truc
Bach lake overlooking West lake, creating harmony in landscape
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
and in religious culture of Vietnam. Vietnamese.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
was built
in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ly
Dynasty (
Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.
1010 - 1028
) when
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ly
Thai To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the capital from
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hoa
Lu
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ninh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Binh
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thang
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Long
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
Hanoi, he built the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
is one of four
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temples
guarding the gateway of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thang
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Long
Citadel, including: Bach Ma
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Voi
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phuc
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
, Kim Lien
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
, and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
, affirming the nation's sense of independence and sovereignty and solidarity.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
tight
dynastic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
is a
particularly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
architectural work associated with the formation and development of the ancient
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thang
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Long
citadel and present day Hanoi.

Our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
standing
at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
, opposite the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
, there are four pillars consisting of 4 large columns, the inner two columns are higher than the outer two columns, above there is a carving of a phoenix and two mascots in the folk beliefs of Vietnam. Vietnamese
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
people


Do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
this port with a normal port?

Yes, that's
right
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
is called
tam
Possible spelling mistake found.
quan
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
, it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from the normal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in addition
to the main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
, there are 2
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gates
forming 3 aisles, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
is
usually
built in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temples
, one number of palaces, communal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
, and villages according to the traditional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
of the Vietnamese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. The three-way
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
means three ways of seeing Buddhism.

Above the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
, there is a kanji inscription, may I ask if anyone in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
understands the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meaning
of the above words?

This is the kanji
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meaning
of the three words that are Chan
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
, the name of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
when the Nguyen Dynasty came to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
. And
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
invite our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
to go
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inside
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
currently
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
standing
in front of the mortuary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. This is a large space decorated according to traditional Vietnamese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
. In the middle in front of the main hall is a rockery with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meaning
of accumulating essence, harmonizing yin and yang. On our
Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?
right hand
side is a row of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statues
of elephants in uniform, put them here to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
respect to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Huyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thien
Tran
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meaning
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
animals
still
obey him.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
we will go
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inside
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
to learn more about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
here.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Currently
, our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
standing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
inside
the shrine hall of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
has two layers, the outer layer has a high hammock door, both layers hang a signboard carved with the poem of King Thieu
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tri
.

Standing here we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
more
clearly
about the ancient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
of the Vietnamese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. The skillful carvings
are integrated
into the wooden slats of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
with typical themes such as flowers, bats, fish, wine gourds, swords, scenes of life on earth and heaven.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
This sculpture is
deeply
influenced by the Le Dynasty.
In addition
to the artistic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
architecture
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
antiques
are preserved
, such as the bronze medallion built in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Trinh
lord's time by Admiral Le Van
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ngu
minting money. There is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statue
called the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statue
of boss
Possible spelling mistake found.
Trong
, cast in black bronze, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
believe that this is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
who commanded the casting of Tran
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statue
. The whole
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
of us went to the last room of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
,
also
known as the harem, where the treasure
is located
, the heart of the whole
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temple
is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statue
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Huyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thien
Tran
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
built in the year of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vinh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tri
king. Le
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hy
Tong (1677) is 3.
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "96 m"
96m
high,
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "8 m"
8m
in circumference, weighs 4 tons and sits on a 1.
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "2 m"
2m
high marble rock. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
statue
has a square-shaped face, dignified and calm with straight eyes,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
long
beard, loose hair, and no hat. Wearing a Taoist robe, he sat on a stone platform holding a sword against the back of a turtle lying between his legs around the blade with a snake wrapped from bottom to top.

Snake turtle and sword combined is the symbol of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Huyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thien
Tran
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vu
. And this is
also
the last point in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quan
Thanh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temple
. Do you have any questions to ask, I will answer your questions
to the best of my knowledge
. Yes, if you have no more questions, I would like to say goodbye to our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
here.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Currently
at 9am you will have 30 minutes to
freely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
and rest, at 9: 30am we will be at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gate
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to the
next
place to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you in the near future and will
also
hope that Vietnam will be a great destination for you.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS speaking Giả sử bạn là hướng dẫn viên, Bạn hãy thuyết minh cho khách về Đền Quán Thánh

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
1037 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    This is a topic THis is a topic This is a topic
    What is Lorem Ipsum? Lorem Ipsum is simply dummy text of the printing and typesetting industry. Lorem Ipsum has been the industry's standard dummy text ever since the 1500s, when an unknown printer took a galley of type and scrambled it to make a type specimen book. It has survived not only five ce...
  • 5.5band
    Synthesis and characterization of chitosan quaternary ammonium salts
    The quaternized chitosan has promising applications in biomedicine as pharmaceuticals and targeted delivery, in gene therapy, tissue engineering, and cosmetology due to the improved solubility and enhancing many biological functions in comparison to the non-quaternized chitosan. The increased potent...
  • 6band
    speaking plan going out to eat
    Phuong: Hi Huyen. I am sorry for being late. When I was sleeping, my mom went out and locked the door because she didn’t know I would meet you. How long have you been waiting for me? Huyen: Oh. Don’t worry. I have just come. I see you seem to be exhausted. Are you sick? Phuong: Not serious. I only...
  • 6band
    Describe an lesson that you really enjoyed You should say: Where and when it took place + - Who the teacher was What you did in the lesson And explain why you enjoyed it so much
    I want to tell you about one of the school days during my stay in a classroom in the United Kingdom. It was a couple of years ago when we went on a study trip to study English and UK culture. Together with me were several of my classmates and our English teacher Victoria Yunitskaya, who planned this...
  • 5band
    Listening is a difficult skill for students
    Listening Listening is a difficult skill for students due to the lack of opportunities for language experience with the target language. One of the interviewed students states that listening is difficult for him, and it is difficult for him to solve exercises in this language where listening exists....
  • 6band
    Talk about your holiday in your country
    Vietnamese public holidays are fantastic times to celebrate and experience unique moments of the country’s culture. On these days, people will usually rest or travel with their families. Some localities hold festivals to attract tourists. Especially on Tet holiday, everyone will return to their home...