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Describe a teacher who has influenced you in your education. v.2

Describe a teacher who has influenced you in your education. v. 2
Describe a teacher who has influenced you in your education. You should say: •  where you met him/her •  what subject s/he taught you •  what was special about him/her and explain how this person/teacher has influenced you in your education so much. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Follow-up Questions: • How has education changed in your country in the last 10 years? • What changes do you foresee in the next 50 years? • How do the expectations of today’s school leavers compare with those of the previous generation? • What role do you think extracurricular activities play in education?
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where you met him/her

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what subject s/he taught you

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what was special about him/her and
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explain
how this person/teacher has influenced you in your
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so
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talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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some
notes to
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you if you wish.
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Follow-up Questions:

• How has
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education
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changed
in your country in the last 10 years?

• What
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changes
do you foresee in the
next
50 years?

• How do the expectations of
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today
’s
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school leavers
compare with those of the previous generation?

• What role do you
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think
extracurricular activities play in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
?
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IELTS speaking Describe a teacher who has influenced you in your education. v. 2

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
135 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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