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COMPLAINT LETTER TO director of Carrapair

COMPLAINT LETTER TO director of Carrapair m1W1L
Dear sir or madam I am feeling quiet down in the mouth from writing this letter to you. The reason for releasing this letter is that recently as I have had your service from your workshop for my car and there have appeared several defects from the part which your assistant has replaced. After not many days passed from the installment the engine started to consume more fuel than regularly consumption. Moreover, after 2 days of repair the engine started to become overheated even though your master refilled the water tank with special antiboiling liquid for a reasonable price as well. After all that I realize that your assistant replaced wrong part to my engine then all started to go wrong. I request to you to make a visit o my garage with towing car and bring it to your workshop for fixing all the problems that was made by your mechanic. I believe, this letter will receive your immediate attention. With warmest regards Bakhodirjon
Dear sir or madam

I am feeling quiet down in the mouth from writing this letter to you. The reason for releasing this letter is that recently as I have had your service from your workshop for my car and there have appeared several defects from the part which your assistant has replaced.

After
not
many
days passed from the installment the engine
started
to consume more fuel than
regularly
consumption.
Moreover
, after 2 days of repair the engine
started
to become overheated
even though
your master refilled the water tank with special
antiboiling
liquid for a reasonable price
as well
.
After
all that I realize that your assistant replaced
wrong
part to my engine then all
started
to go
wrong
.

I request to you to
make
a visit o my garage with towing car and bring it to your workshop for fixing all the problems that
was made
by your mechanic. I believe, this letter will receive your immediate attention.

With warmest regards
Bakhodirjon
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IELTS letter COMPLAINT LETTER TO director of Carrapair

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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