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You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position. PVg72
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regarding to the job opportunity for “Human Resource Information Technology Professional”, which I saw on LinkedIn. I have completed my Post-Graduation in Social Work at Loyola College, Chennai. In addition, I am specialized in Human Resource Management. Besides, I have attended various seminars on the relationship between Human Resource and Information System during my college. The job description about the opportunity seems exhilarating! I would look forward to work in your renowned company, if I am offered a chance. This job would amplify my career prospects in Information system. Therefore, I am highly motivated to enhance my skills. I would love to explore and learn workday, the new information system. Previously, I have two year of experience in functional front of workday. I have also performed, mass transactions and query handling, which is similar to the position applied. Please find my attached CV along with this letter. Considering my education and my work experience, I hope I would be a suitable candidate for the position, I am applying to. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Nancy
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
the job opportunity for “Human Resource
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Information
Technology Professional”, which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
on LinkedIn. I have completed my Post-Graduation in Social Work at Loyola College, Chennai.
In addition
, I
am specialized
in Human Resource Management.
Besides
, I have attended various seminars on the relationship between Human Resource and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Information
System during my college.

The job description about the opportunity seems exhilarating! I would look forward to work in your renowned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, if I
am offered
a chance. This job would amplify my career prospects in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Information
system.
Therefore
, I am
highly
motivated to enhance my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to explore and learn workday, the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
system.

Previously, I have two year of experience in functional front of workday. I have
also
performed, mass transactions and query handling, which is similar to the position applied.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
find my attached CV along with this letter. Considering my education and my work experience, I hope I would be a suitable candidate for the position, I am applying to.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Nancy
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

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7 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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