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You were hurt in a small accident in a store last week. Write a letter to the store manager in your letter. - Introduce yourself - Describe what happend - say what action you would like the manager to take.

You were hurt in a small accident in a store last week. Write a letter to the store manager in your letter. - Introduce yourself - Describe what happend - say what action you would like the manager to take. XjG8
Dear store manager, I am writing to you to drag your attention towards the accident I met at your store last week when I purchased grocery. My name us John smith and I am one of your frequent customers. I live in woodpark and found your store as one of the best grocery store in our area. Not only you sell good quality food items but also the price rate is quite reasonable. When I entered your store, last weeks, I found so much rush at store and, even the products were messed upon racks may be due to sale. While doing shopping suddenly, I fell down on the floor and get injures due to spilled water on the floor. Although the cleansers were there still I am not able to understand why the floor was wet and, even no signboards were kept to avoid such kind of incident. As a regular customer, I was expecting immediate response and apology which was missing. As a manager, I would like you to take some strict action to words it to even avoid such unwanted situation and aweful behavior of staff. I hope you will consider it positively and tone care of do to repeat it in future. Yours faithfully, Sandra Brown.
Dear
store
manager,

I am writing to you to drag your attention towards the accident I met at your
store
last week when I
purchased
grocery.

My name us John
smith and
I am one of your frequent customers. I
live
in
woodpark
and found your
store
as one of the best grocery
store
in our area. Not
only
you sell
good
quality food items
but
also
the price rate is quite reasonable.

When I entered your
store
, last weeks, I found
so
much rush at
store
and, even the products
were messed
upon racks may be due to sale. While
doing shopping
suddenly
, I fell down on the floor and
get
injures due to spilled water on the floor. Although the cleansers were there
still
I am not able to understand why the floor was wet and, even no signboards were
kept
to avoid such kind of incident.

As a regular customer, I was expecting immediate response and apology which was missing. As a manager, I would like you to take
some
strict action to words it to even avoid such unwanted situation and
aweful
behavior of staff.

I hope you will consider it
positively
and tone care of do to repeat it
in future
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sandra Brown.
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IELTS letter You were hurt in a small accident in a store last week. Write a letter to the store manager in your letter. - Introduce yourself - Describe what happend - say what action you would like the manager to take.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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