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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. elRO
My name is kesther Uwaje and i just completed a cookery course in African delicacies. The purpose of this letter is to give feeback on my entire 6 weeks of study while learning to cook the african food. I was born in the western world, United States of America to be precise, even though my parents are Africans, and my growing up has actually been abit wielrd not knowing how to cook as an African Child. My finance who is a foodie actually introduced me to the school to improve my cooking since we would be getting married in the next 12 Months. Initially, i was un-interested in the first few weeks as the lecturer started with the long rules of cooking, and i was always nervorse because my class mates were already cooks in the real world and only came to the school to be certifield. I felt i was all alone at the amatuer stage. The fun for me came in the third week, when we started practicals. The grouping made me loosing up and i made goods friends whom i call sisters now. Particularly when my group came first in the steering constest. This improved my confidence level, I remember each night before sleeping, practicing im my room to be better than i was yesterday. Presently my family, especially my Finance are all proud of me. I currently run an online blog where i teach tinnagers how to become a BOSS of their own through cooking. I also do cathering for intending couples about to get married, social occasions and home services. I am happy i came for the training and this summer, i have already started planning to come back for another course but this time, i am learning Interior Decoration and Home management because, While doing my cathering Job, i have had alot of offers relating to Interior Decoration and i know learning this will improve my services list to the public. Thank you for such an experience and extend my regards to the lecturers, Mr Kenny in particular. He is so professional in doing his JOB. Kind regards, Kesther Uwaje
My name is
kesther
Uwaje
and
i
just
completed a cookery course in African delicacies.

The purpose of this letter is to give
feeback
on my entire 6 weeks of study while learning to cook the
african
food. I
was born
in the western world, United States of America to be precise,
even though
my parents are Africans, and my growing up has actually been
abit
wielrd
not knowing how to cook as an African Child. My finance who is a foodie actually introduced me to the school to
improve
my cooking since we would be getting married in the
next
12 Months.

Initially
,
i
was
un-interested
in the
first
few weeks as the lecturer
started
with the long
rules
of cooking, and
i
was always
nervorse
because
my
class
mates were already cooks in the real world and
only
came
to the school to be
certifield
. I felt
i
was all alone at the
amatuer
stage.

The fun for me
came
in the third week, when we
started
practicals. The grouping made me loosing up and
i
made
goods
friends whom
i
call sisters
now
.
Particularly
when my group
came
first
in the steering
constest
. This
improved
my confidence level, I remember each night
before
sleeping, practicing
im
my room to be better than
i
was yesterday.

Presently
my family,
especially
my Finance are all proud of me. I
currently
run an online blog where
i
teach
tinnagers
how to become a BOSS of their
own
through cooking. I
also
do
cathering
for intending couples about to
get
married, social occasions and home services.
I
am happy
i
came
for the training and this summer,
i
have already
started


planning to
come
back for another course
but
this time,
i
am learning Interior Decoration and Home management
because
, While doing my
cathering
Job,
i
have had
alot
of offers relating to Interior Decoration and
i
know learning this will
improve
my services list to the public.

Thank you for such an experience and extend my regards to the lecturers, Mr Kenny
in particular
. He is
so
professional in doing his JOB.

Kind regards,

Kesther
Uwaje
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.

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  American English
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6.0
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