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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Ram, I am writing in response to your complaint of disturbance coming from my flat. I am sincerely apologizing for that issue. As you aware that my marriage is fixed on 18th of this month, we are renovating our house to have a beautiful look. There is some wooden work going on for cupboards of kitchen and also staircases. I already told to the carpenters, to use the hammering machine during the business hours, so that many people are not disturbed by the noise, as they will be in their offices. As my wedding date is already fixed, and we are having less time, the carpenters are in a hurry to finish the work by that time. Due to the machines they are using for the work, you are getting noise from my house. The wooden work is already over and, I will assure you from now, you will not get any sound from my home. I am extremely sorry for this matter and please attend my wedding on 18th of this month. Hoping to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Raviteja
Dear Ram,

I am writing in response to your complaint of disturbance coming from my flat. I am
sincerely
apologizing for that issue.

As you aware that my marriage is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
on 18th of this month, we are renovating our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
look. There is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
wooden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
going on for cupboards of kitchen and
also
staircases. I already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
to the carpenters, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the hammering machine during the business hours,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are not disturbed by the noise, as they will be in their offices. As my wedding date is already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
, and we are having less time, the carpenters are in a hurry to finish the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
by that time. Due to the machines they are using for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, you are getting noise from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. The wooden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
is already over and, I will assure you from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, you will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
any sound from my home.

I am
extremely
sorry for this matter and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
attend my wedding on 18th of this month.

Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
!

Yours
lovingly
,

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Raviteja
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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