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Describe a child that you know and like a lot

I’m going to tell you about my younger brother. He’s three years old, and we have a difference in age for 14 years. He has brown hair, big eyes and looks so charming. He’s the youngest child in our family and due to this fact he’s favorite child for my parents and a little bit spoiled. He used to be very obedient when he was two or three years old but now he’s quite capricious. He is gently child who likes hug, also he’s playful and he likes frolic with 5 years old sister. Both of them very talkative and hyperactive children and sometimes makes me feel annoyed. I often play with him, go for a walk in parks, buy chocolate and ice cream. He is fond of cartoons about dinosaurs. He prefers to watch it in the English language. Also he likes playing football with my father. When he was smaller I had taught him to walk, looked after and so on. I like him a lot because he is very adorable and cute child.
I’m going to
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three years
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, and we have a difference in age for 14 years. He has brown hair,
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eyes and looks
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charming.
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He
’s the youngest
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in our family and due to this fact
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favorite
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for my parents and a
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little bit
spoiled.
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obedient when he was two or three years
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old
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but
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he’s
quite capricious.
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is
gently
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who
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hug,
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playful and
he
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frolic with 5 years
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sister. Both of them
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talkative and hyperactive children and
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me feel annoyed. I
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play with him, go for a walk in parks,
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buy
chocolate and ice cream. He is fond of cartoons about dinosaurs. He prefers to
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it in the English language.
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Also
he
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likes
playing football with my father. When he was smaller I had taught him to walk, looked after and
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so
on. I
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like
him a lot
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he is
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IELTS letter Describe a child that you know and like a lot

Letter
  American English
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176 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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