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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Explain what you like about his new house Tell him/her what you enjoyed most during your staying Suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Explain what you like about his new house Tell him/her what you enjoyed most during your staying Suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him. g555O
Dear Aman, I hope you would be in high spirits and pink health. Hey dude! I am missing you and your family a lot. I must say the weekend I spend at your home was the golden days of my life; hence, I am writing this to thank you for the hospitality. Your home is as same as my dream house. The most interesting thing was the voice assistance technology installed names “Alexa”. Although I heard about that, never witnessed. Moreover, the interior decoration of every single room is splendid. Apart from this your parents and grandparents are really caring. I love the way, they pampered me and the valuable life experience they shared. Last but not least, the cuisines were literally finger licking, even I never had such taste in renowned hotels. Anyway, I know next month it’s the 50th anniversary ceremony of your grandparents, so I was thinking to give a grand party. In sake of this I will get opportunity to meet you and family again. At last I would like to thank you for all this, and keep this in mind, I am waiting for your reply about the anniversary party. Lovingly, Vikas
Dear
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Aman
,

I hope you would be in high spirits and pink health. Hey dude! I am missing you and your family a lot. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say the weekend I spend at your home was the golden days of my life;
hence
, I am writing this to thank you for the hospitality.

Your home is as same as my dream
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. The most interesting thing was the voice assistance technology installed names “Alexa”. Although I heard about that, never witnessed.
Moreover
, the interior decoration of every single room is splendid.

Apart from this your parents and grandparents are
really
caring. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the way, they pampered me and the valuable life experience they shared. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least, the cuisines were
literally
finger licking, even I never had such taste in renowned hotels.

Anyway, I know
next
month it’s the 50th anniversary ceremony of your grandparents,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I was thinking to give a grand party. In sake of this I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you and family again.

At
The comma is probably missing here: "last, I".
last I
would like to thank you for all this, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
this in mind, I am waiting for your reply about the anniversary party.

Lovingly
,

Vikas

IELTS letter You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Explain what you like about his new house Tell him/her what you enjoyed most during your staying Suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

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196 words
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