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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing a letter to ask for joining the beauty technology seminar in Tokyo. I am now working as a product development assistant in a cosmetic company in Thailand. As Japan has a leading role of Beauty Industry in Asia, this event is a great chance for me to know the latest trend and technology of my field. It would be helpful for setting the marketing stategy and plan in future. Since I need to get the permission and allowance from my company, I am hoping to have the detailed information (dates, program, accommodation and price) of this seminar. Can you please send the details to me by e-mail? I am grateful if I can join this event. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Laura Bush
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing a letter to
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ask for
joining the beauty technology seminar in Tokyo.

I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
working as a product development assistant in a cosmetic
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company
in Thailand. As Japan has a leading role of Beauty Industry in Asia, this
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event
is a great chance for me to know the latest trend and technology of my field. It would be helpful for setting the marketing
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stategy
and plan
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

Since I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the permission and allowance from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, I am hoping to have the detailed information (dates, program, accommodation and price) of this seminar. Can you
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please
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send
the
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details
to me by e-mail? I am grateful if I can
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join
this
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event
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Laura Bush

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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