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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to off

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to off nKQ7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Writing this letter to provide a feedback on the cookery course, which i have taken from your renowned institute last week. As i was very week in cutting skills and cooking food items, so i joined your cooking course which was very beneficial for me after finishing the course. In fact, I learned many useful cooking skills such as new chopping techniques which was really very fascinating. Besides that, i also made some great friends there. After finishing the course, i practiced cooking at home for my family and friends, and receive many appreciation from them. As a result of this, I have developed a keen interest in cooking. i would like to recommend a baking course in your institute. Most people are not good in baking becasue they do not know how to use electric oven in proper way. I would be delighted to enroll in this course. I am lookung forward to hear from you. Yours FaithfullyTushar Arora
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Writing this letter to provide a feedback on the cookery
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course
, which
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i
have taken from your renowned institute last week. As
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i
was
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very
week in cutting
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skills
and cooking food items,
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so
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i
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joined
your cooking
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course
which was
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very
beneficial for me after finishing the
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course
. In fact, I learned
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many
useful cooking
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skills
such as new chopping techniques which was
really
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very
fascinating.
Besides
that,
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i
also
made
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some
great friends there. After finishing the
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course
,
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i
practiced cooking at home for my family and friends, and receive
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many appreciation
from them.
As a result
of this, I have developed a keen interest in cooking.
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i
would like to recommend a baking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your institute. Most
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people
are not
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good in baking
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becasue
they do not know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
electric oven in proper way. I would
be delighted
to enroll in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I am
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lookung
forward to hear from you. Yours
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FaithfullyTushar
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Arora

IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to off

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