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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear BEbp
Dear Sim or Madam, I am writing in regard to the enrollment requirement for the advanced data structure course for this upcoming term. I am highly interested in this course, and I believe I have the necessary skills to complete it. I hope you would consider my situation favourably. I understand that the registration prerequisite of this course is completing the elementary data structure course. Although I haven't taken this course, I do have a strong interest in this course and a solid understanding of basic data structure, which I learned from a rigorous online course offered by Stanford University last year. So I believe I am well prepared for taking this course and complete it successfully. Considering my situation, would you kindly approve my registration for the course as a special exception? If it is possible, I am also willing to take an initial assessment to demonstrate my proficiency of the required knowledge. I look forward to hearing back from you. Sincerely, Shawn
Dear Sim or Madam,

I am writing in regard to the enrollment requirement for the advanced data structure
course
for this upcoming term. I am
highly
interested in this
course
, and I believe I have the necessary
skills
to complete it.
I
hope you would consider my situation
favourably
.

I
understand that the registration prerequisite of this
course
is completing the elementary data structure
course
. Although I haven't taken this
course
, I do have a strong interest in this
course
and a solid understanding of basic data structure, which I learned from a rigorous online
course
offered by Stanford University last year.
So
I believe I am
well prepared
for taking this
course
and complete it
successfully
.

Considering my situation, would you kindly approve my registration for the
course
as a special exception? If it is possible, I am
also
willing to take an initial assessment to demonstrate my proficiency of the required knowledge.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

Sincerely
,

Shawn
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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