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you are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

you are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party 13Dq
Dear friend, I hope this letter of mine finds you in good health and high spirits. Its long since we communicated. Through this letter, I want to know about the recipe of delicious biryani that you cooked for dinner few months later. I am happy to inform you that, I am going to host a party, as I got promoted as a Senior Executive and my family and me are extremely happy. So, we decided to arrange a get-together with my close friends. I am going to cook different cuisines, one of them is Lucknowi Biryani but, unfortunately, I forgot its recipe and slip of ingredients is also missing. Would you send me detailed recipe as I want to give all guests a fabulous experience of dinner. You are cordially invited in party, Sunday evening at my place. I hope you will understand that urgency and do needfull. Yours loving, Harry
Dear friend, I hope this letter of mine finds you in
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good
health and high spirits.
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long since we communicated. Through this letter, I want to know about the recipe of delicious biryani that you cooked for dinner few months later. I am happy to inform you that, I am going to host a party, as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
promoted as a Senior Executive and my family and me are
extremely
happy.
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So
, we decided to arrange a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
-together with my close friends. I am going to cook
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different
cuisines, one of them is
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Lucknowi
Biryani
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but
, unfortunately, I forgot its recipe and slip of ingredients is
also
missing. Would you
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send
me detailed recipe as I want to give all guests a fabulous experience of dinner. You are
cordially
invited in party, Sunday evening at my place. I hope you will understand that urgency and do
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needfull
. Yours loving,
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Harry
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IELTS letter you are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

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  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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