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Motivation letter, Statement of Purpose

Motivation letter, Statement of Purpose 3gE5N
Motivation letter To, HUNGARY HELPS Date: 9-JAN-2022 Dear Madam/Sir, I'm Flavia age 27, a single citizen of Karachi, Pakistan. I used very delightedly to examine the "Scholarship for Christian young people" Scholarship Program opportunity provided by the Hungary Helps. With this letter, I might wish to introduce myself and specify the thing which motivated me. Since Business has continually been the main target of my attention I even have set to develop my career in Business. I would love to be a part of the Master program in International Economy and Business. For me the Scholarship for Christian young people is a financial aid to study abroad because my father has retired, and I don't have any financial resources to study more in our country, I had have been looking for such kind of scholarship which might fulfil my needs, and I wanted to travel in the European nation particularly in Hungary which has a long history and tradition in higher education, I believe the good reputation and sensible ranking of the Hungarian universities can offer me the opportunity to support my studies and let me do my best in my future, also will make me able to meet people from all around the world who can familiarise me with several cultures and increase my ability to relate to others, which I feel is incredibly necessary to boost my professional background. Most recently, I completed my Bachelor in Business Administration in December 2020, and I am going to submit my Bachelor of Studies degree and transcripts as proof. My curriculum potential will allow me to continue my education successfully in business, especially in the International Economy and Business. I would like to apply for a Masters in International Economics and Business. I am a desperate student who wants to develop her professional to acquire innovative knowledge and skills. My current qualifications enable me to apply for a master's program in Hungary. Moreover, my main motivation for pursuing this master's degree is to evaluate my degree by training in the same field as I plan to return to my home country after completing the degree and will be an inspiration and support to international students. Lastly, I believe, I have a strong foundation with my work and study, but I hope to develop expertise in international through the master's program, focusing on the betterment of my country and Christian community. Thank you very much for considering my request and I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Flavia Chaman.
Motivation letter

To,

HUNGARY
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HELPS


Date: 9-JAN-2022

Dear Madam/Sir,

I'm Flavia age 27, a single citizen of Karachi, Pakistan. I
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used
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very
delightedly
to examine the
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"
Scholarship for Christian young
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people
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"
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Scholarship
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Program
opportunity provided by the Hungary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Helps
.

With this letter, I might wish to introduce myself and specify the thing which motivated me.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
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Business
has
continually
been the main target of my attention I even have set to develop my career in
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Business
. I would
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love
to be a part of the Master
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program
in
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International
Economy and Business.

For me the
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Scholarship
for Christian young
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people
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is
a
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financial
aid to
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study
abroad
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because
my father has retired, and I don't have any
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financial
resources to
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study
more in our country, I had have been looking for such kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scholarship
which might fulfil my needs, and I wanted to travel in the European nation
particularly
in Hungary which has a long history and tradition in higher education, I believe the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reputation and sensible ranking of the Hungarian universities can offer me the opportunity to support my
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studies
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me do my best in my future,
also
will
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make
me able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from all around the world who can
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familiarise
me with several cultures and increase my ability to relate to others, which I feel is
incredibly
necessary to boost my professional background.

Most recently, I completed my Bachelor in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Business
Administration in December 2020, and I am going to submit my Bachelor of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Studies
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degree
and transcripts as proof. My curriculum potential will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to continue my education
successfully
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
,
especially
in the
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International
Economy and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Business
. I would like to apply for a Masters in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
International
Economics and Business.

I am a desperate student who wants to develop her professional to acquire innovative knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
qualifications enable me to apply for a master's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
in Hungary.

Moreover
, my main motivation for pursuing this master's
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degree
is to evaluate my
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degree
by training in the same field as I plan to return to my home country after completing the
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degree
and will be an inspiration and support to
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international
students.

Lastly
, I believe, I have a strong foundation with my work and
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study
,
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but
I hope to develop expertise in
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international
through the master's
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program
, focusing on the betterment of my country and Christian community.

Thank you
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very
much for considering my request and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
,

Flavia
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Chaman
.
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IELTS letter Motivation letter, Statement of Purpose

Letter
  American English
14 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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