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you have recently moved to new house and want to invite your friend, Describe your house, your neighborhood and invite them to your house.

you have recently moved to new house and want to invite your friend, Describe your house, your neighborhood and invite them to your house. pX7LD
Dear Monisha, I am writing this letter to let you know about my new space. Recently, I moved to London Downtown and am extremely delighted to give you the virtual visualization of my new house. First of all, it is located in the heart of the city, where you can find plethora of skyscrapers. However, I am glad to let you know that I live in one of those now. Our flat is located in third floor and it has got three bedrooms, a kitchen along with spacious living room. Living room is of course painted with yellow color, which is my personal favorite as you know and all three bedrooms with soft pastel colors which will make you feel cozy and relaxed. Also, we have bought some cool set of furniture which adds more beauty to the house. And I must say that we have got a great neighborhood. They have installed a BBQ in their garden and a conservatory to make the most out of sunny days. I really want you to visit my house next weekend. Please consider this invitation as my personal request as I wouldn't be able to give the meet you in person. So, what more, I will look forward for your presence. Best WishesLavana
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, I am writing this letter to
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let
you know about my new space. Recently, I
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moved
to London Downtown and am
extremely
delighted to give you the virtual visualization of my new
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house
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First of all
, it
is located
in the heart of the city, where you can find plethora of skyscrapers.
However
, I am glad to
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let
you know that I
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live
in one of those
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now
. Our flat
is located
in third floor and it has
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got
three bedrooms, a kitchen along with spacious living room. Living room is
of course
painted with yellow color, which is my personal favorite as you know and all three bedrooms with soft pastel colors which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you feel cozy and relaxed.
Also
, we have
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bought
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some
cool set of furniture which
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adds
more beauty to the
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house
. And I
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must
say that we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a great neighborhood. They have installed a BBQ in their garden and a conservatory to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the most out of sunny days. I
really
want you to visit my
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house
next
weekend.
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Please
consider this invitation as my personal request as I wouldn't be able to give the
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meet
you in person.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, what more, I will look forward for your presence. Best
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
WishesLavana
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IELTS letter you have recently moved to new house and want to invite your friend, Describe your house, your neighborhood and invite them to your house.

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