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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding job in your country.you have heard about a job in local company thatt might be suitable for him.

Dear Kevin, How are you doing? I am so thrilled to hear back from you my dear friend. There is a vacancy on motherson company. it has got good reputation and the work responsibility includes managing the team and completing target on time. I think you are more apt for this job as you possess excellent leadership quality. During college time you have been the leader of our batch and working under pressure is your merit. To apply for this job you must visit their website and look for employment section. Download the form and after filling it send it to company officil website. They will call you for an enterview if they liked your profile. Your faithfully John
Dear Kevin, How are you doing? I am
so
thrilled to hear back from you my dear friend. There is a vacancy on
motherson
company
.
it
has
got
good
reputation and the work responsibility includes managing the team and completing target on time. I
think
you are more apt for this job as you possess excellent leadership quality. During college time you have been the leader of our batch and working under pressure is your merit. To apply for this job you
must
visit their website and look for employment section. Download the form and after filling it
send
it to
company
officil
website. They will call you for an
enterview
if they liked your profile. Your
faithfully
John
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IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding job in your country. you have heard about a job in local company thatt might be suitable for him.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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