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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding job in your country.you have heard about a job in local company thatt might be suitable for him.

Dear Kevin, How are you doing? I am so thrilled to hear back from you my dear friend. There is a vacancy on motherson company. it has got good reputation and the work responsibility includes managing the team and completing target on time. I think you are more apt for this job as you possess excellent leadership quality. During college time you have been the leader of our batch and working under pressure is your merit. To apply for this job you must visit their website and look for employment section. Download the form and after filling it send it to company officil website. They will call you for an enterview if they liked your profile. Your faithfully John
Dear Kevin, How are you doing? I am
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thrilled to hear back from you my dear friend. There is a vacancy on
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motherson
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reputation and the work responsibility includes managing the team and completing target on time. I
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think
you are more apt for this job as you possess excellent leadership quality. During college time you have been the leader of our batch and working under pressure is your merit. To apply for this job you
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must
visit their website and look for employment section. Download the form and after filling it
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send
it to
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company
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website. They will call you for an
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enterview
if they liked your profile. Your
faithfully
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John

IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding job in your country. you have heard about a job in local company thatt might be suitable for him.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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