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You have recently moved to a different house. (Informal Letter) Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Maggi, I am writing to let you know that finally, we have moved to a bigger house! We just could not go on living in the two-bedroom apartment now that the children are growing up and we need more space for indoor activities. So we started looking and finally, here we are in our new home. I’m sure you’ll love it. We have three bedrooms now and two balconies. The house comes with spacious bathrooms and a modern kitchen. The kids are happy because there is more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But James is perhaps the happiest of all because this house is near to his office. Why don’t you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue party in the garden. Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you. Lots of love, Emma
Dear Maggi,

I am writing to
let
you know that
finally
, we have
moved
to a bigger
house
! We
just
could not go on living in the two-bedroom apartment
now
that the children are growing
up and
we need more space for indoor activities.
So
we
started
looking and
finally
, here we are in our new home.

I’m sure you’ll
love
it. We have three bedrooms
now
and two balconies. The
house
comes
with spacious bathrooms and a modern kitchen. The kids are happy
because
there is more space with the
big
living room and the garden outside.
But
James is perhaps the happiest of all
because
this
house
is near to his office.

Why don’t you
come
round this weekend and
see
what you
think
of our new place? We would all
love
to
see
you and if the weather is
good
we can have a barbecue party in the garden.

Our new address and phone number are below,
so
give us a call and
let
us know when to
expect
you.

Lots of
love
,

Emma
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. (Informal Letter) Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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