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You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend works for an IT company and you need his/her Help, Write a letter to this friend in your letter. Describe your business Ask your friend to help you build the website Say how you will thank your friend for his/her help

Dear sandip, I hope you are fine. I'm glad to write this letter to give you good news that I'm going to start a food court and I think I should create a website for the same and I need your help as I know you are a very good website developer. Nowadays, People are becoming foodie and most people order online food due to the Corona Pandemic. They avoid coming to hotels so I think I would like to represent various foods on my website. I also provide them food at their doorstep. I know you have developed many successful websites in the market, So I want your help and it will be very useful to develop my business. At Present there are many competitors in the market and they are using the same tricks to induce people. So I hope you'll try something different. If possible please come with your family on this Sunday. This way we can get a great family get-together and we will also discuss my business. I look forward to hearing from you soon. With love Hemang Patel
Dear
sandip
,

I hope you are fine. I'm glad to write this letter to give you
good
news that I'm going to
start
a
food
court and I
think
I should create a
website
for the same and I need your
help
as I know you are a
very
good
website
developer.

Nowadays,
People
are becoming foodie and most
people
order online
food
due to the Corona Pandemic. They avoid coming to hotels
so
I
think
I would like to represent various
foods
on my
website
. I
also
provide them
food
at their doorstep. I know you have developed
many
successful websites in the market,
So
I want your
help and
it will be
very
useful to develop my business.

At Present there are
many
competitors in the
market and
they are using the same tricks to induce
people
.
So
I hope you'll try something
different
.
If
possible
please
come
with your family on this Sunday. This way we can
get
a great family
get-together and
we will
also
discuss my business.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

With
love


Hemang
Patel
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IELTS letter You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend works for an IT company and you need his/her Help, Write a letter to this friend in your letter. Describe your business Ask your friend to help you build the website Say how you will thank your friend for his/her help

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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