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You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter -Explain why you are writing -Describe what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.

You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter -Explain why you are writing -Describe what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant. RBLk
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about an unpleasant experience we had at your restaurant. As you already know we visit the place quite often and we felt disappointed after this experience. As usual we ordered your special biryani that day. Unfortunately, the chicken pieces in that were under cooked and raw. We could even see blood stains on the meat chunks. We returned the dish to get it cooked properly but even after that we received the biryani with the same issue. When we requested the waiter to take it back again, he was hesitant to do so and his behavior was impolite as well. I would suggest that you ensure food quality before it is served to customers and please make sure that the staff has welcoming attitude towards guests. I am sorry for suggesting this, but I do not have any other way as this is one among our favorite restaurants. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Suraj
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about an unpleasant experience we had at your restaurant. As you already know we visit the place quite
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
often and
we felt disappointed after this experience.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
The comma is probably missing here: "usual, we".
usual we
ordered your special biryani that day. Unfortunately, the chicken pieces in that were under cooked and raw. We could even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
blood stains on the meat chunks. We returned the dish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it cooked
properly
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but
even after that we received the biryani with the same issue. When we requested the waiter to take it back again, he was hesitant to do
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so
and his behavior was impolite
as well
.

I would suggest that you ensure food quality
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before
it
is served
to customers and
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that the staff has welcoming attitude towards guests. I am sorry for suggesting this,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I do not have any other way as this is one among our favorite restaurants.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Suraj
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IELTS letter You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter -Explain why you are writing -Describe what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.

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  American English
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163 words
6.0
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