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you are organizing a family party write a letter to your freind to come to the party

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Dear Michael. I am writing to invite to you my mother's birthday for the evening of Friday 14th of July On this day, my mother will be 60 years old and it will be her anniversary party, therefore we would like to invite all our relatives and also her close freinds. I know that you are the best singer and journalist among in our city. When I go different parties i enjoy your poems, beside that your voice is really wonderfull, mainly with various songs. I want to come you our party we are going to make suprise to our mother. Furthermore you wll sing new songs with new poems. Please come here earlier this day see you soon Love Mary
Dear Michael. I am writing to invite to you my mother's birthday for the evening of Friday 14th of July On this day, my mother will be 60 years
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and it will be her anniversary party,
therefore
we would like to invite all our relatives and
also
her close
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freinds
. I know that you are the best singer and journalist among in our city. When I go
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different
parties
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i
enjoy your poems, beside that your voice is
really
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wonderfull
,
mainly
with various songs. I want to
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come
you our party we are going to
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make
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suprise
to our mother.
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Furthermore
you
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wll
sing new songs with new poems.
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Please
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come
here earlier this day
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you
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Love
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Mary
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IELTS letter you are organizing a family party write a letter to your freind to come to the party

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  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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