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omplaint about your airline services on the domestic airport.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to a job position available in your company which was advertised in the Times Now on November 10. As you can see from my CV, I am currently working with Fidelity Investment, a mutual fund company as a Human Resource Generalist and have 5 years of experience. My job responsibilities include the hiring of new employees, their onboarding process and connecting with them regularly to check their satisfaction levels. I understand from the job description that you are looking for the similar set of experience and skills. I have a pleasant personality and good communication skills. As far as my educational credentials are concerned, I have a master’s degree in business administration with human resources as a specialisation. If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to a job position available in your
company
which
was advertised
in the Times
Now
on November 10.

As you can
see
from my CV, I am
currently
working with Fidelity Investment, a mutual fund
company
as a Human Resource Generalist and have 5 years of experience. My job responsibilities include the hiring of new employees, their onboarding process and connecting with them
regularly
to
check
their satisfaction levels. I understand from the job description that you are looking for the similar set of experience and
skills
.

I have a pleasant personality and
good
communication
skills
. As far as my educational credentials
are concerned
, I have a master’s degree in business administration with human resources as a
specialisation
.

If you find my
skills
and experience suitable,
please
contact me to schedule an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you
personally
.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter omplaint about your airline services on the domestic airport.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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