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You and some friend ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food ant the service

You and some friend ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food ant the service 8WbG
Dear sir/madam Good afternoon, I am anamica I am writing this letter to the restaurant manager. We were attempt the cousins celebration. On the special occasion held on febravary 21 Saturday we altogether four members in the restaurantIn there fooding style was enormus. The taste of each dish was individual. Expecially the Red wine. It was in perfect temperature. We feel bad while not drink it. Last but not least the seating arrangements are perfect I have, nt see any of the restaurant. Each of them zeitgest. Those day was pospores to us Yours faithfully, Anamica
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anamica
I am writing this letter to the restaurant manager. We were
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the
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cousins
celebration. On the special occasion held on
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febravary
21 Saturday we altogether four members in the
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restaurantIn
there
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fooding
style was
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enormus
. The taste of each dish was individual.
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Expecially
the Red wine. It was in perfect temperature. We feel
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bad
while not drink it. Last
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but
not least the seating arrangements are perfect I have,
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nt
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any of the restaurant. Each of them
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zeitgest
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Those day
was
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pospores
to us Yours
faithfully
,
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Anamica
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IELTS letter You and some friend ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food ant the service

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  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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