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A Japanese friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, say how you feel about the visit, suggest what you could do on his/her birthday and suggest other fun things to do while he/she is visiting

A Japanese friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, say how you feel about the visit, suggest what you could do on his/her birthday and suggest other fun things to do while he/she is visiting nK5E
Dear Yami, Hey, how's it going? I thought about calling, but I love the old-fashioned art of letter writing. I am so stoked for your visit and just can't wait to see you again. I have missed you terribly, as no one gets my weird jokes here. Now, I have tons of activities planned for your birthday. Since you are turning 30, it will be memorable. First, I'll whip my renowned cheesy cassava pancakes for breakfast before we go on a hike to our famous mount Mayon which has one of the most symmetrical cones in the world. Then, we'll have a beachside dinner party with my friends for you to meet them, followed by a crazy dance party. For the rest of your time here, we'll explore my hometown using my old bikes, it will be fun and exciting. I know that you're addicted with the mangoes here so we'll harvest some of it in my grand father's backyard. You should try the mango soaked in to the well-known Ilocano black vinegar. If we have extra time, we can even buy some souvenirs at the night market. Please send me a copy of your itinerary and I'll pick you up at the airport arrival waiting area. See you! Love, Jermaine
Dear
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Yami
, Hey, how's it going? I
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thought
about calling,
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but
I
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love
the
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old
-fashioned art of letter writing. I am
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so
stoked for your visit and
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just
can't wait to
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see
you again.
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I
have missed you
terribly
, as no one
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gets
my weird jokes here.

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Now
, I have tons of activities planned for your birthday. Since you are turning 30, it will be memorable.
First
, I'll whip my renowned cheesy cassava pancakes for breakfast
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before
we go on a hike to our
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famous
mount
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Mayon
which has one of the most symmetrical cones in the world. Then, we'll have a
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beachside
dinner party with my friends for you to
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meet
them, followed by a crazy dance party.

For the rest of your time here, we'll explore my hometown using my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
bikes, it will be fun and exciting. I know that you're addicted with the mangoes here
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we'll harvest
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some
of it in my grand father's backyard. You should try the mango soaked in to the well-known
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Ilocano
black vinegar. If we have extra time, we can even
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buy
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some
souvenirs at the night market.

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Please
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send
me a copy of your itinerary and I'll pick you up at the airport arrival waiting area.
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See
you!

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Love
, Jermaine
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IELTS letter A Japanese friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, say how you feel about the visit, suggest what you could do on his/her birthday and suggest other fun things to do while he/she is visiting

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  American English
5 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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