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You and your family went to a restaurant one night The next day the family left sick with food poisoning Complain to the Manager about the whole issues

You and your family went to a restaurant one night The next day the family left sick with food poisoning Complain to the Manager about the whole issues 7apLA
Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your notice about food hygiene issues in your restaurant during last week visit with my family at your restaurant. I am a regular client at your restaurant from last two years and regularly visit over weekends. During my visit in last week we observed the restaurant capacity was full and every employee was busy attending the guest as the restaurant was jam-packed. I envisaged due to increase in number of guest at restaurant, the chef's and kitchen team might have overlooked on the hygiene factor of the food served to the customer. We visited restaurant on last week Saturday i. e. 15th February 2019 around 08: 00 PM. We were family of four members and we ordered Indian and Chinese cuisine. In the Indian cuisine we ordered Rice, Dal Fry, Cottage Cheese and flatten breads while Chinese food we just ordered Noodles and Dumplings. After starting our meal we felt some foul smell in the food for which we complaint to the staff who was attending our family. To our surprise he did not feel that food was bad and did not agreed for replacement. We left the restaurant around 09: 00 PM as my daughter started having stomach ache. The next day morning we all went to hospital due to severe stomach ache and after the diagnosis we found out that we all got infected with food poisoning. It took three days for use to get cure and start our daily routine. As a regular customer of your renowned restaurant this was a horrifying experience for me and my family. We are sure we will never visit the restaurant again however your should focus on food quality else these types of issues may impact your restaurant brand image. Your Truly M. XXXXX
Dear Sir,

I am writing to bring to your notice about
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hygiene issues in your
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restaurant
during last week
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visit
with my
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family
at your
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restaurant
. I am a regular client at your
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restaurant
from last two years and
regularly
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visit
over weekends.

During my
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visit
in last week we observed the
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restaurant
capacity was full and every employee was busy attending the guest as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
was jam-packed. I envisaged due to increase in number of guest at
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restaurant
, the chef's and kitchen team might have overlooked on the hygiene factor of the
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food
served to the customer.

We visited
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restaurant
on last week Saturday
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i. e.
15th February 2019 around 08: 00 PM. We were
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family
of four
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members and
we ordered Indian and Chinese cuisine. In the Indian cuisine we ordered Rice,
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Dal
Fry, Cottage Cheese and flatten breads while Chinese
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food
we
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ordered Noodles and Dumplings. After starting our meal we felt
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some
foul smell in the
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food
for which we
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complaint
to the staff who was attending our
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family
. To our surprise he did not feel that
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food
was
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bad
and did not
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agreed
for replacement. We
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left
the
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restaurant
around 09: 00 PM as my daughter
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started
having stomach ache. The
next
day morning we all went to hospital due to severe stomach ache and after the diagnosis we found out that we all
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got
infected with
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poisoning.

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use to
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get
cure and
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our daily routine. As a regular customer of your renowned
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restaurant
this was a horrifying experience for me and my
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family
. We are sure we will never
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visit
the
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restaurant
again
however
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your
should focus on
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food
quality else these types of issues may impact your
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restaurant
brand image.

Your
Truly


M.
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IELTS letter You and your family went to a restaurant one night The next day the family left sick with food poisoning Complain to the Manager about the whole issues

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5.5
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