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letter to manager for attending a training program

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I am writing with regards to attending a training course in New York for the betterment of my profile. An advertisement was published in The New York Times newspaper on 26th July for the training of human resource professionals. It is a well-conceived plan as it has invited revered personalities in the field of psychology to shed light on multifaceted problems being faced at the workplace and would guide on tackling those issues meticulously. I would request you to permit me two hours for the two-day’s session. The scheduled times is 11. 00 am to 1. 00 pm. I am aware that there is a plethora of pending work; however, I have already had a word with my assistant, and he would look after the work in my absence. I believe that this program would be highly beneficial for my work as employees discuss concerns at work, but sometimes solutions are not readily available. Nonetheless, with the guidance of experts, I am confident I will produce reliable answers to the issues faced by the staff, and there would be a high-employee retention ratio. Thank you for your consideration in advance, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Travis
I am writing
with regards to
attending a training course in New York for the betterment of my profile.

An advertisement
was published
in The New York Times newspaper on 26th July for the training of human resource professionals. It is a well-conceived plan as it has invited revered personalities in the field of psychology to shed light on multifaceted problems
being faced
at the workplace and would guide on tackling those issues
meticulously
.

I would request you to permit me two hours for the two-day’s session. The scheduled times is 11. 00 am to 1. 00 pm. I am aware that there is a plethora of pending
work
;
however
, I have already had a word with my assistant, and he would look after the
work
in my absence.

I believe that this program would be
highly
beneficial for my
work
as employees discuss concerns at
work
,
but
sometimes
solutions are not
readily
available. Nonetheless, with the guidance of experts, I am confident I will produce reliable answers to the issues faced by the staff, and there would be a high-employee retention ratio.

Thank you for your consideration in advance, and I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Travis
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IELTS letter letter to manager for attending a training program

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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