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Write a letter to your friend/family to describe an accident that has happened to you and ask for help.

Write a letter to your friend/family to describe an accident that has happened to you and ask for help. 1nLEN
Dear Chandru,  Hey, this is bittu, your childhood friend. I hope you are doing well. Recently, I have heard that you have been awarded as best employee of the year and all your hard work was worked for you. I am very happy for you buddy. I really miss those days, when we are in the college days making gossips, talking about funny jokes, commenting on teachers, hanging out unnecessarily and I miss you, buddy. Buddy, last week I went on a road trip towards sakleshpur with my office colleagues in my own car. The drive was crazy and nature was fantastic.  During my journey, I accidentally met with an accident from the opposite side of the vehicle, trashing my car. I and my colleagues were injured and hospitalized. The reason why I am writing a letter, I need help from you that as you know my mother stays alone in the home and I could not inform her about the accident. I need you to take care of my mother for few days until I get back from the hospital. I will be thankful to you if you would help in this situation and I look forward to your response.
Dear
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Chandru
,
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Hey, this is
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bittu
, your childhood friend. I hope you are doing well. Recently, I have heard that you have
been awarded
as best employee of the year and all your
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hard
work
was worked
for you. I am
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very
happy for you buddy. I
really
miss those days, when we are in the college days making gossips, talking about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
funny
jokes, commenting on teachers, hanging out
unnecessarily
and I miss you, buddy. Buddy, last week I went on a road trip towards
Possible spelling mistake found.
sakleshpur
with my office colleagues in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
car. The drive was crazy and nature was fantastic.  During my journey, I
accidentally
met with an accident from the opposite side of the vehicle, trashing my car. I and my colleagues
were injured
and hospitalized. The reason why I am writing a letter, I need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from you that as you know my mother stays alone in the home and I could not inform her about the accident. I need you to take care of my mother for few days until I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back from the hospital.

I will be thankful to you if you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in this situation and I look forward to your response.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend/family to describe an accident that has happened to you and ask for help.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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