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Volunteer work at the museum

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement from the museum that said it is looking for part-time volunteers. I wish to tell you that I am interested in the role. Hence, I would like to officially register myself as a possible candidate for the job. This work interests me for I see it as an opportunity to give back to the society. Also, I am a huge admirer of art and I can't appreciate enough all the extraordinary work the museum has put together so far, in terms of exhibitions and art fairs. Having said that, it would bring me immense pleasure if I get to be a part of the museum and contribute my bit. I would like to notify you that I have a good experience with voluntary work. As a matter of fact, I served as a volunteer at the Science Museum, Townhall during summer vacation. Hence, I am aware of the generic responsibilites that possibly come with the role. I am also a quick learner which will certainly help with picking up any new task that this role must require. It is certain that I will prove to be a good addition to the current staff. Hence, I request you to please consider my request for the open role. If you choose to go forward with my candidature, I will be available to work starting next Monday i. e. , 26th July, 2021. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Samriddhi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement from the
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museum
that said it is looking for part-time volunteers. I wish to
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tell
you that I
am interested
in the role.
Hence
, I would like to
officially
register myself as a possible candidate for the job. This
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work
interests me for I
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see
it as an opportunity to give back to the society.
Also
, I am a huge admirer of art and I can't appreciate
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enough
all the extraordinary
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work
the
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museum
has put together
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so
far, in terms of exhibitions and art fairs. Having said that, it would bring me immense pleasure if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to be a part of the
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museum
and contribute my bit.

I would like to notify you that I have a
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good
experience with voluntary
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work
. As a matter of fact, I served as a volunteer at the Science
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Museum
,
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Townhall
during summer vacation.
Hence
, I am aware of the generic
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responsibilites
that
possibly
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come
with the role. I am
also
a quick learner which will
certainly
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help
with picking up any new task that this role
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must
require. It is certain that I will prove to be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
addition to the
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current
staff.
Hence
, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
consider my request for the open role.

If you choose to go forward with my candidature, I will be available to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
starting
next
Monday
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i. e.
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,
26th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "July 2021".
July, 2021
. I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards,

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Samriddhi
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IELTS letter Volunteer work at the museum

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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