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The following appeared in a health newsletter."Nosinia is an herb that many users report to be as effective as prescription medications at fighting allergy symptoms. Researchers recently compared Nosinia to a placebo in 95 men and women with seasonal alle

The following appeared in a health newsletter. " Nosinia is an herb that many users report to be as effective as prescription medications at fighting allergy symptoms. Researchers recently compared Nosinia to a placebo in 95 men and women with seasonal alle YLmBQ
The argument states a news that appeared in anhealth newsletter which recommends Nosinia, a herb, to help people with severe allergy symptoms. There are many assumptions, for which the author has not provided any evidence. I would strongly disagrre with argument as it is flawed in numerous ways. First of all, the experiment has been done with only 95 men and women which may not be the entire representative for the whole of the population. The sample population is very limited to conclude that the resukts obtained will be also be valid for the rest of the population. If the people who went through the experiment are healthy and immune enough, the results will not be accurate to describe others. If either of the cases were true, the argument does not hold water. Secondly, the news has not provided any supporting evidence to prove the researchers statement that Nosinia was more effective than placebo in providing relief for the most severe allergy symptoms. Whether this has been experimented or not? Are the results accurate enough to be applied to the whole of the population? Only if answers to these questions is provided, the researchers statement can be interpreted. Moreover, there is a lack of evidence to recommend using Nosinia for severe allergy symptoms and also the severity of the symptoms has not been well explained. If Nosinia is suited for a particular symptom and not suitable for the other, it cannot be recommended to all of the severe symptoms as a whole. Additionally, the argument fails to explain how severe is highly severe. Only if the symptom causes harmful effects to the body such as skin deterioration it is very severe? The question to the above is not stated for further analysis. In conclusion, the argument, as stated, rests on several unstated assumptions. Only when the author could provide more information and supporting evidences to the above assumptions, it is possible for the argument to be valid.
The
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anhealth
newsletter which recommends
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Nosinia
, a herb, to
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help
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people
with
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severe
allergy
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symptoms
. There are
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many
assumptions, for which the author has not provided any
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evidence
. I would
strongly
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disagrre
with
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argument
as it
is flawed
in numerous ways.

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, the experiment has
been done
with
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only
95
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men
and women which may not be the entire representative for the whole of the
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population
. The sample
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population
is
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very
limited
to conclude
that the
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resukts
obtained will be
also
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be
valid for the rest of the
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population
. If the
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people
who went through the experiment are healthy and immune
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enough
, the results will not be accurate to
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describe
others. If either of the cases were true, the
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argument
does not hold water.

Secondly
, the news has not provided any supporting
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evidence
to prove the
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researchers
statement that
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Nosinia
was more effective than placebo in providing relief for the most
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severe
allergy
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symptoms
. Whether this has
been experimented
or not? Are the results accurate
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enough
to
be applied
to the whole of the
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population
?
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Only
if answers to these questions
is provided
, the
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researchers
statement can
be interpreted
.

Moreover
, there is a lack of
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evidence
to recommend using
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Nosinia
for
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severe
allergy
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symptoms
and
also
the severity of the
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symptoms
has not been well
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explained
. If
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Nosinia
is suited
for a particular
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symptom
and not suitable for the other, it cannot
be recommended
to
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all of the
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severe
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symptoms
as a whole.
Additionally
, the
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argument
fails to
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explain
how
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severe
is
highly
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severe
.
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Only
if the
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symptom
causes harmful effects to the body such as skin deterioration it is
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very
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severe
? The question to the above is not stated for
further
analysis.

In conclusion
, the
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argument
, as stated, rests on several unstated assumptions.
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Only
when the author could provide more information and supporting
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evidences
to the above assumptions, it is possible for the
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argument
to be valid.
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IELTS letter The following appeared in a health newsletter. " Nosinia is an herb that many users report to be as effective as prescription medications at fighting allergy symptoms. Researchers recently compared Nosinia to a placebo in 95 men and women with seasonal alle

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