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One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v.2

One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been notified by one of my close friends that your organisation is looking for a few bilingual assistant tutors to work with foreign children. I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Anna Pattison, whom I consider a deserving candidate for the post. I know Anna for more than 14 years. She used to be my classmate at the Cherry Blossom International School and then in Saint John College. She used to be an enthusiastic organiser and participant in extracurricular activities. For her outstanding leadership skills and cheerful personality, she was nominated class captains for most of her academic years in school. Her excellent skills in both English and Spanish make her ideal for the post that involved working closely with children. She completed her graduation from Arts major and received a distinctive medal for her exceptional academic performance. Upon her graduation, she worked as a teacher in an international school in London, where she has been teaching bilingual lessons for five years. What’s more, she loves being around children and easily wins their hearts. Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure she would be an excellent candidate for the post. Yours faithfully, Enya Brennan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have
been notified
by one of my close friends that your
organisation
is looking for a few bilingual assistant tutors to work with foreign children. I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Anna
Pattison
, whom I consider a deserving candidate for the post.

I
know Anna for more than 14 years. She
used
to be my classmate at the Cherry Blossom International School and then in Saint John College. She
used
to be an enthusiastic
organiser
and participant in extracurricular activities. For her outstanding leadership
skills
and cheerful personality, she
was nominated
class
captains for most of her academic years in school. Her excellent
skills
in both English and Spanish
make
her ideal for the post that involved working
closely
with children.

She completed her graduation from Arts major and received a distinctive medal for her exceptional academic performance. Upon her graduation, she worked as a teacher in an international school in London, where she has been teaching bilingual lessons for five years. What’s more, she
loves
being around children and
easily
wins their hearts.

Therefore
, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure she would be an excellent candidate for the post.

Yours
faithfully
,

Enya
Brennan
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.
Frank Smith

IELTS letter One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v. 2

Letter
7 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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