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One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v.1

One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to recommend one of my close friends, Millie Mercy, for the position of assistant supervisor in your organisation. She has an outstanding academic record, prior work experience with children and an amiable personality which would make her a suitable candidate to work in your organisation. I have been close to Millie from my childhood. She was my classmates both in school and college. Due to her leadership quality, excellent academic performance and pleasant personality, teachers and students loved her dearly. She won a prestigious prize during her school graduation ceremony and then got admitted to Johanson's Merit College where she was an active organiser of social events. She completed her graduation from the University of Eden and then worked as an interpreter for the United Nation. Afterwards, she travelled extensively and worked closely with two different humanitarian organisations in many parts of the world. She can speak English, French and Spanish fluently. She even has prior teaching experience and children love her very much. I would definitely recommend her for the position you have advertised. Should you need any further information please do not hesitate to write to me. Yours faithfully, Elyse Villani
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to recommend one of my close friends, Millie Mercy, for the position of assistant supervisor in your
organisation
. She has an outstanding academic record, prior work experience with children and an amiable personality which would
make
her a suitable candidate to work in your
organisation
.

I have been close to Millie from my childhood. She was my classmates both in school and college. Due to her leadership quality, excellent academic performance and pleasant personality, teachers and students
loved
her
dearly
. She won a prestigious prize during her school graduation ceremony and then
got
admitted to
Johanson
's Merit College where she was an active
organiser
of social
events
.

She completed her graduation from the University of Eden and then worked as an interpreter for the United Nation. Afterwards, she travelled
extensively
and worked
closely
with two
different
humanitarian
organisations
in
many
parts of the world. She can speak English, French and Spanish
fluently
. She even has prior teaching experience and children
love
her
very
much.

I would definitely recommend her for the position you have advertised. Should you need any
further
information
please
do not hesitate to write to me.

Yours
faithfully
,

Elyse
Villani
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter One of your friends wants to apply for a job that involves working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. v. 1

Letter
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resources: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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