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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course MMB7o
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter for get a addmission in computer course. However, i read that this course is only for people with elementry studies. I always been interested in computers from my childhood. But, I never get a chance to do any professional study. I really want in this course and I am fully ready for come in but, only thing i don't have is my before study certificate. I know i don't have theroycal study but, i am ready with my practical knowledge. In the end, I just want to make a request to you if there is any chance or any kind of other test if i can give on time and i can prove myself. Please if you can make this amendment in this course then, I can follow my dream with that. Thanks in advance.
Dear Sir or Madam,

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Thanks in advance.

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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