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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter Kw06N
Dear Venkat, This is to inform that there has been a problem with the bus service at my locality from past two weeks as the bus station is under renovation on the contrary there is a construction work going beside to the bus stop. I am seeking your assistance for company transport as this issue is hampering my work and blocking me to reach office on time. By Approving the company transport can ease me to maintain my punctuality and provide a quality of service to the clients and mitigate the daily occurring issues, like, responding to clients lately, not observing tasks on timely manner. Not only, does this problem solve my issues, but also, It has an unpresented constructive impact to the organizations. Needless to say, company transport plays a vital role in the age of artificial intelligence. May I request you to please approve the organizational transport. Waiting for to hear back a positive response. Regards, Shaik Azeemuddin
Dear
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Venkat
,

This is to inform that there has been a problem with the bus service at my locality from past two weeks as the bus station is under renovation
on the contrary
there is a construction work going beside to the bus
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stop
. I am seeking your assistance for
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company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
as this issue is hampering my work and blocking me to reach office on time.

By Approving the
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company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
can
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ease
me to maintain my punctuality and provide a quality of service to the clients and mitigate the daily occurring issues, like, responding to clients lately, not observing tasks on timely manner. Not
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only
, does this problem solve my issues,
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but
also
, It has an
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unpresented
constructive impact to the organizations. Needless to say,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
plays a vital role in the age of artificial intelligence.

May I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
approve the organizational
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
. Waiting for to hear back a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Regards,

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Shaik
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Azeemuddin
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

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159 words
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